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Today, my French test and English presentation finally ended. I was very happy and relieved because I had worked hard for both of them. Although I feel sleepy now, I still have to go to my part-time job. I am a little tired, but I will do my best and enjoy my free time later.
2026年7月20日 05:28
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Today, my French test and English presentation finally came to an end. I was very happy and relieved because I had worked hard for both of them. Although I feel sleepy now, I still have to go to my part-time job. I’m a little tired, but I’ll do my best and enjoy my free time later.
Level: C1.
Your writing is fluent, natural, and well organised. You express both your relief and your tiredness clearly, and your ideas flow smoothly from one sentence to the next. The corrections were purely stylistic, as your grammar is already very strong. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026年7月20日 09:47
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