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#247 Could you help me correct this text? The Japanese style Public Bath and SPA The public bath and spa which is located by my house is going to close in this weekend. It seems that there are some reasons, the corona crisis, the high fuel cost e.t.c. It has been my favorite place to get a relaxation for long time. Therefore, when l heard about the news, l’m very sad and disappointed. I wish it could continue running if possible, but it can’t be helped. I’m going to go there one last time.
2023年3月28日 11:28
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#247 Could you help me correct this text? The Japanese style Public Bath and SPA The public bath and spa which is located by my house is going to be closing it's door this weekend. It seems that there are some reasons, the corona crisis, the high fuel cost e.t.c. It has been my favorite place to relax for long time. Therefore, when l heard about the news, l’m very sad and disappointed. I wish it could continue running if possible, but it can’t be helped. I’m going to go there one last time.
I always wanted to go to a Japanese onsen!
2023年3月28日
#247 Could you help me correct this text? The Japanese Style Public Bath and Spa The public bath and spa (which is) located next to my house is going to close this weekend. It seems that there are some reasons including the coronavirus crisis, the high costs of fuel, etc... It has been my favorite place to relax for a long time. Therefore, when l heard about the news, l was very sad and disappointed. I wish it could continue running if possible, but it can’t be helped. I’m going to go there one last time.
2023年3月28日
#247 Could you help me correct this text? The Japanese-Style Public Bath and Spa [<--- Heading, right. That's why head words are capitalized?] The public bath and spa located by my house ["located by my house" is restrictive] is going to close this weekend. It seems that there are some reasons: the corona crisis, the high fuel costs, etc. It has been my favorite place to go for relaxation/to relax for a long time, so when l heard about the news, l was very sad and disappointed. I wish it could continue running if possible, but it can’t be helped. I’m going to go there one last time.
It can be sad when a fixture in our lives is removed and there's nothing we can do about it.
2023年3月28日
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