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I went to the dentist today. After that, I went to my part-time job. I’m looking forward to summer break starting soon. During summer break, I’m going to Hokkaido, see a Vaundy concert, and visit Tottori. I have a lot planned, and I’m really excited. The only exams left are psychology and biology. Summer break is just around the corner, so I’m going to do my best.
2026年7月21日 13:49
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I went to the dentist today. After that, I went to my part-time job. I’m looking forward to summer break starting soon. During the summer break, I’m going to Hokkaido, see a Vaundy concert, and visit Tottori. I have a lot planned, and I’m really excited. The only exams I have left are psychology and biology. Summer break is just around the corner, so I’m going to do my best.
Level: C1.
Your writing is fluent, well organised, and very natural. You clearly describe your day and your plans, and your grammar is consistently accurate. Only a couple of small stylistic improvements were needed to make the English sound even more idiomatic. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026年7月21日 14:19
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