Riman
Advertisements are absolutely important in our daily life, because it leads us to services and goods we need. Advertisements are everywhere on social media, on billboards, on TV , as well as in podcasts. Personally, advertisements- especially those on social media- have helped me a lot to find good things I want to buy.
2023年10月23日 18:57
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Advertisements are absolutely vital in our daily lives, because they make us
aware of services and goods we need. Advertisements are everywhere on social media, on
billboards, on TV , as well as in podcasts. Personally, advertisements-
especially those on social media- have helped me a lot to find good things I
want to buy.
'Absolutely' does not collocate (combine) well with 'important'. You could however have used 'extremely important' or 'really important'.
Also you more commonly find the association of 'goods and services' rather than the other way around.
If you are looking to raise the level of your English somewhat, you could also think about how you could replace 'a lot' and 'good', with more interesting expressions.
These are just suggestions - not 'corrections'.🙂
2023年10月23日
Advertisements are absolutely important in our daily lives because they lead us
to services and goods we need. Advertisements are everywhere on social media, on
billboards, on TV, as well as in podcasts. Personally, advertisements
especially those on social media - have helped me a lot to find good things I
want to buy.
2023年10月23日
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