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a scary case tonight I had a scary case tonight. I was woken up tonight by the strong noise of the explosion and failure of something from the kitchen. I got up and went to the kitchen. There was a big pan with glass saucepan lid on the stove. All glass of the lid was broken for small pieces and failed into the pan. It turns out that in the evening when my wife was cooking, she, by mistake, put the lid on the gas for a few minutes. But why it happened after several hours in the night I don't know.

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I had a scary incident case tonight.
I was woken up tonight [1] by the strong loud noise of an the explosion and failure destruction of something [or 'something breaking'] from the kitchen. I got up and went to the kitchen. There was a big pan with a glass saucepan lid on the stove. All The glass of the lid [2] was broken into for small pieces and fell failed into the pan. It turneds out that in the evening when my wife was cooking, she by mistake accidentally put the lid on the gas for a few minutes. But why the lid broke it happened after several hours into the night is not something I don't know.[3]

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[1] 'Tonight' is implied by the previous sentence, so you don't need to write it again in this case.
[2] The lid being glass is also implied by the previous sentence.
[3] I would probably rephrase and say, 'But I don't know why the lid broke several hours into the night'.
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I guessed some of the details.

I had a startling/scary experience tonight.
I was woken up tonight by the loud noise of an explosion and something falling in the kitchen. I got up and went to the kitchen. There was a big pan with a glass saucepan lid on the stove. All the glass of the lid was broken into small pieces and fell into the pan. It turns out that in the evening when my wife was cooking, she, by mistake, put the lid on the fire for a few minutes. But how it exploded in the night, several hours after that, I don't know.


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