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It was too hot yesterday. I thought summer is coming. My hometown's temperature was 25℃. However, tomorrow will rain at night. I'm sad. I'll do my best at my part-time job tomorrow.

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It was too hot yesterday. I thought summer *was* coming. My hometown's temperature was 25℃. However, tomorrow *it's going to* rain at night. I'm sad. I'll do my best at my part-time job tomorrow.
The last sentence is perfect! 🌧️
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It was too hot yesterday. I thought summer is coming. My hometown's temperature was 25℃. However, tomorrow will rain at night. I'm sad. I'll do my best at my part-time job tomorrow' Hi kanaaa! Good writing 😊 Quick tip: "tomorrow will rain" → "it will rain tomorrow" "At night" works better at the end. Want me to explain why? I help students with grammar. Message me

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