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It was too hot yesterday. I thought summer is coming. My hometown's temperature was 25℃. However, tomorrow will rain at night. I'm sad. I'll do my best at my part-time job tomorrow.
2026年5月12日 15:07
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It was too hot yesterday. I thought summer *was* coming. My hometown's temperature was 25℃. However, tomorrow *it's going to* rain at night. I'm sad. I'll do my best at my part-time job tomorrow.
The last sentence is perfect! 🌧️
5 小時前
It was too hot yesterday. I thought summer is coming. My hometown's temperature was 25℃. However, tomorrow will rain at night. I'm sad. I'll do my best at my part-time job tomorrow'
Hi kanaaa! Good writing 😊
Quick tip: "tomorrow will rain" → "it will rain tomorrow"
"At night" works better at the end.
Want me to explain why? I help students with grammar. Message me
3 小時前
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