Francesca🎀
“This is one of my biggest desires in life.” Is this sentence correct? How can I make it sounds more natural? Thank you 🙏🏻
2023年2月1日 13:46
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受邀老師
“This is one of my biggest desires in life.” Is this sentence correct? How can I make it sounds more natural? Thank you 🙏🏻
This is both correct and natural. You will hear native speakers use the exact same wording. We also often times use the words "dream" for unrealized desires.
2023年2月1日
受邀老師
“This is one of my biggest desires in life.” Is this sentence correct? How can I make it sound more natural? Thank you 🙏🏻
Hi Francesca, I see this is for your italki bio, right? Generally there's absolutely nothing wrong with the sentence you've written here. Allow me to share a personal suggestion, though: "This is one of my greatest aspirations in life." Now, the purpose here is not to use as many complex and advanced words as we can - but rather to make use of as much of the language as possible to express ourselves in the clearest way we can :) Hope this helps! Also, you can say here "how can I make it sound more natural" instead of "soundS".
2023年2月1日
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