Every thursday I can enjoy my lovely city by bicycle! Today, I went to a famous park hear whose name is Botânico Garden. There is a beautifil greenhouse there with some plant species. This month it's

Renata Bernardino

Every thursday I can enjoy my lovely city by bicycle! Today, I went to a famous park hear whose name is Botânico Garden. There is a beautifil greenhouse there with some plant species. This month it's pink, because is a month of breast cancer prevention.

2020年10月23日 01:41

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Every Thursday, I enjoy my lovely city on my bicycle! Today, I went to a famous park here called the Botanical Gardens. There is a beautiful greenhouse there with some plant species. This month it's pink because it is breast cancer prevention month.

Remember the days of the week need to be capitalized. Also, you don’t need a comma before “because.”

2020年10月23日

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