I went to izakaya to eat with club members, because it was an after party for a dance event. 17 out of 25 people showed up. It was so much fun.
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I went to *an* izakaya to eat with club members because it was an *after-party* for a dance event. 17 out of 25 people showed up. It was so much fun.
"To izakaya" needs the article "an" before it "an izakaya." "After party" is usually hyphenated: "after-party." The comma before "because" isn't needed here. Everything else is great! sounds like a brilliant night! 🍻
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