Hi friends, please check and correct the sentence for me: “I asked my daughter to practice skipping which is also required by her school with 1500 times a day. “ Many thanks!

搜尋自英語 {1} 教師……

Jessie💞Isabella

2021年5月28日 00:36

修正 · 12

Hi friends, please check and correct the following sentence for me: “I asked my daughter to practice skipping which is also a requirement at her school where students do up to 1500 revolutions a day!" Many thanks!

It's a pleasure, Isabella and Jessie! I salute you for a job well done! Use the exclamation mark to be more emphatic, because 1500 seems like a lot to an ignorant person like me! I think the rest of the corrections are self-explanatory, but let me know if there was anything you did not understand. Light and peace! ☝🏽🙏🏽🤲🏽🔥🌞🕊️🌈🌠

2021年5月28日

I asked my daughter to practice her skipping which is also a requirement by her school's PE class. She needs to skip 1500 times a day when she's home.

2021年5月28日

Hi friends, please check and correct the sentence for me: “I asked my daughter to practice skipping which is also required by her school with 1500 times a day. “ Many thanks!

That's a lot of skipping! I wouldn't make it :( lol

2021年5月28日

想進步快一點嗎？

加入此學習社群，來試做免費的練習吧！