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It is <em>a </em>common belief that yellow press <em>(I have never heard this term before...  I am more familiar with 'the tabloids' so that would be 'the tabloids are disgusting')</em> is disgusting. However, there are some people who believe it is fun.

There are a lot of opinions about yellow press. Some people like reading such news, other people think, that it is disgusting. However, yellow press <em>has existed (or if it is 'the tabloids have existed for)</em> <em>for </em>many years, and it means that there are a lot of followers of yellow newspapers who buy them and read with pleasure <em>for </em>the scandal<em>ous</em> information.

Yellow press is a print press <em>(i'm not sure this is the right term..  maybe newspaper or magazine?)</em> which is cheap and specialize<em>s</em> in scandals, gossips, and rumors. The news <em>is</em> not often truthful, but it makes such news more interesting. People always are interested in information about the stars' li<em>ves</em> and are ready to discuss it. If somebody discusses a story from yellow press, such newspaper is considered as successful. The incorrect information <em>spreads</em> with the help of gossip, and the famous people, wh<em>ose</em> personal li<em>ves were</em> touched upon, are often dissatisfied. They sometimes even bring <em>a legal</em> action <em>against the paper</em>. Besides, if the article was successful and the subject of wide speculation, it means that the newspaper earned enough money to pay for court costs.

On the other side, a lot of people really have fun read<em>ing</em> yellow press. There are various themes of topics in yellow press. It is one of the reasons why people like reading them. Marriages, divorces, different scandals, lost people, UFOs – they are only some of them. Such facts from other people's li<em>ves</em> make their life more interesting than usual. It is a good topic for discussion with friends or colleagues at the office. Honestly, it is not important, if such news were not really true. The news must be actual and unexpected, that is keystone to success.

The most important part of yellow news is the title. It the title doesn’t sound scandal<em>ous</em>, nobody will read <em>the </em>news. Sometimes even the titles have nothing to do with the text. The good title is only the possibility to involve people. Somebody goes in the street and see<em>s an</em> interesting title in the shop window. Then he or she buys it in order to be well informed about the important events in the world. They <em>might</em> be disappointed after reading it, but the newspaper was sold.

In conclusion, I want to say, that people <em>should</em> be more careful before buying such yellow press. It can help them not to be disappointed and not to waste money and time.

<em>Hope this helps a bit:</em>

France <em>was </em>founded <em>on the</em> four<em>th</em> of october of <em>nineteen</em> fifty-eight. 

This nationali is French for men and woman <em>(? The national language is French for men and women)</em>

The tempeture is about thirteen and twelve depends of the weather <em>(The temperature now is about 12-13 degrees, but it depends on the season)</em>

The weather in france is cloudy and cool. 

The limits (<em>borders)</em> are: in the west, the atlantic ocean, in the south, the mediterranean, and monaco and italy, in the north, watercourse of the stain (? English Channel?) and <em>lastly</em> east with luxembourg and germany.

Th<em>e</em> attractions are the eiffel tower, the louvre museum, notre dame cathedral, the blue coast, bow of the win of paris (sorry I don't know this) , versalles palace , island of la cité and mont blanc. 

And the metropolis (<em>capital)</em> is Paris, the city of the love. Paris ha<em>s</em> very m<em>any</em> things, <em>such</em> as the eiffel tower , monceau park , louvre museum and it's pyramid ,<em>and the</em> island of la cite.

'Matt Bomer'

Today i'm going to introduce you <em>to</em> 'Matt bomer' who is better known as 'Neil Caffrey'
He is <em>(or one of my favorites )</em> my favorite actor who <em>plays</em> the main role in the drama 'White collar'
'White collar' is some kind of Criminal investigation drama.
And he act<em>s</em> as a crime consultant.
In this drama he <em>plays </em>'Neil Caffrey,' <em>a </em>really good Criminal consultant and paradoxically at the same time he is a damn good 'Con man'.
'Matt bomer' is really charming and intelligent and ha<em>s</em> a sense of humor and <em>is </em>really<em> </em>good at acting.
Before act<em>ing in</em> 'white collar' most people <em>didn't</em> know about him about yet.
But he’s becoming famous for “white collar" since 2009
Anyway he already has a husband and has 2 children. The reason why I tell you about this is "he has husband."
Yep he is a guy, but I don't care about <em>that</em> kind of thing. 
That's it, thank you for reading this thing.

<em>I really like watching White Collar too!  Have you ever watched Burn Notice or Psych?  I like those shows too.</em>

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Nowadays, it seems that people have been are especially keen on sporting events, for instance, NBA or the Olympics. People are crazy about them, and they are willing to spend a lot on them. So compared to the people in other important professionals, successful sports professionals can always earn far more.
Some people think it is unfair, especially when they see a famous sports star can easily earning a great deal of money by take a through advertising while unlike people in other professions, like office leaders, famous scientists and the politicians. They are the people who are really benefit for our society. However their effect does not get a good return on their rewards (Maybe a better way to say this is 'Their effect outweighs their reward' or 'they do not get properly repaid for their efforts).
Those people who think this is justified hold the opinion that though a successful sports professional can earn much, they do put a lot of effort into their job before they succeed. Actually, many famous athletes have a lot of injuries which are harm to their health . In the other words, they are using their health in exchange for the high wages earned. Those famous athletes like Yao Ming or Kobe Bryant can often use their influence to do charity work and help those people in the poor areas or some who are disabled. This is also a way to benefit society.
in my opinion, I think it is justified because they should are under huge pressures which common people cannot imagine and at the same time it indicates that our society puts more attention on sports than any other profession.

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Nowadays, it seems that people have been especially keen <em>on</em> sport<em>ing</em> events, for instance, NBA <em>or the </em>Olympics.  People are crazy about it, they are willing to <em>spend a lot</em> on <em>them</em>. So compared to the people in other important professionals, successful sports professionals can always earn far more.
Some people think it is unfair, especially when they see a famous sports star can easily earn<em>ing</em> a great deal of money by take a <em>through</em> advertising <em>unlike</em> people in other professions, such as office leaders, famous scientists and the politicians. They are the people who are really benefit for our society. However their effect <em>does not</em> get a good return on their rewards <em>(Maybe a better way to say this is 'Their effect outweighs their reward' or 'they do not get properly repaid for their effect)</em>.
Those people who think this is justified hold <em>the</em> opinion that though a successful sports professional can earn much, they do put a lot of eff<em>ort</em> into their job before they succeed. Actually, many famous athletes have a lot of injuries which are harm to their health . In the other words, they are using their health in exchange for the high <em>wages earned.</em> Meanwhile those famous athletes like Yao Ming or Kobe Bryant <em>can</em> often use their influence to do charity work and help those people in the poor areas or some <em>who are </em>disabled. This is also a way to benefit society.
in my opinion, I think it is justified because they should under huge pressures which common people <em>can</em>not imagine and at the same time it indicates that our society put<em>s</em> more attention on sport than any other professions.

We don't need a confirmation letter. Adam will deliver a colour chart tomorrow evening, at the latest, and we will confirm <em>the </em>start date by Friday.

<em>Doesn't really need any corrections!</em>

My pleasures are I really enjoy <em>(or my passions are) </em>traveling and do scuba diving.
I always go to abroad alone.
When I go to abroad alone,many people say "Hi"to me.
It's very fun for me.
But I can't speak English well so it is difficult to communicate with foreign friends.
But when I go diving with foreign people we just have fun in the beautiful sea
there is no need words.
I will do my best to study English and when I will go to my next Journey,
I hope I can make a lot of foreign friends.

<em>I really love to travel too.  Most people are friendly and helpful, wherever you go!</em>

I think this sounds a bit more like everyday speech..

Make-up

One of my roommates is good at make-up <em>(or you can say doing make-up or applying make-up)</em>, if any one of us go out for  on a date we would ask her to do our make-up. She applied foundation and natural coloring，put on eye shadow and eye liner and applied lipstick for us according to our characteristics. Personally speaking，I don't really like to wear make-up，I think it's <em>('too much') </em>trouble. In the other way，Also, putting so many different kinds of chemicals on the face is not good for your health. I cherish what my parents gave me and I just want to be myself.

<em>I was always the person my friends asked to do their make-up.  Now I hardly wear any at all..  It takes too long and I would rather sleep longer! :)</em>