HI all, I would be happy if someone could check my short story :) A really special holday. When I was 20 me and my friend went to the see. A few days before, we had booked a place in a campsite for one week and had also paid a deposit. We got to the destinated place by a train. My friend Rick was afraid of being stolen and didn't sleep all night in the train. After getting our campiste we set up a tent. We had never done it before so some people helped us. Then we unpacked our bags and put all things in. After long journey tiredness forced us to take a nap. My friend woke me up, we dressed up and went to a party. During this vacation I met a lot of new people and three people's skin colour was different (I don't know how to write they were black skinned, I don't want to sound like racist). One day we tried wakeboarding. It was the first meet with such activity for most people and that's why we enjoyed it even more. I'm rather competetive person and tried to be the best. One particular situation rooted in my mind. One of the course attendant jumped, a huge gust of wind hit him and he flew 2 meters above the water. When he was flying the second gust of wind hit him and it push him to a nearest rocks. The man was felling down toward to rocks and suddenly just before he hit the rock his shoes was untied/ untied (which version is better? ) from the wakeboard desk. The man fell down into the water. It was the scariest thing I had ever seen. One week almost ended up but in our last day in the morning we got woken up by a guard and were told that we should have left a campsite one day ago. We explained it was a mistake and the managment of that place let us free. We travelled back home also by a train. After gettin on the train I fell asleep instantly and woke up in my home town.