HI all, I would be happy if someone could check my short story :)
A really special holday.
When I was 20
me and my friend my friend and I went to the
see sea. A few days before, we had booked a place in a campsite for one week and had also paid a deposit.
We got to the
destinated place destination by
a train. My friend Rick was afraid of being
stolen mugged and didn't sleep all night in the train.
After getting
to our
campiste campsite we set up a tent. We had never done it before so some people helped us. Then we unpacked our bags and put all
our things in. After
the long journey tiredness forced us to take a nap. My friend woke me up, we dressed up and went to a party.
During this vacation I met a lot of new people and three people's skin colour
s was were different (I don't know how to write they were black skinned, I don't want to sound like racist
you can say people of different nationalities, or multi-racial). One day we tried wakeboarding. It was the first
meet time with
such this activity for most people and that's why we enjoyed it even more. I'm
a rather competetive person and tried to be the best.
One particular situation rooted in my mind. One of the course
's attendant jumped, a huge gust of wind hit him and he flew 2 meters above the water. When he was flying the second gust of wind hit him and it push him to
a the nearest rocks. The man was
felling falling down toward to rocks and suddenly just before he hit the rock his shoes
was untied/ untied (which version is better? ) from the wakeboard
desk. The man fell down into the water. It was the scariest thing I had ever seen.
One week almost
ended up over but
in on our last day in the morning we
got were woken up by a guard and were told that we should have left
a the campsite one day ago. We explained it was a mistake and the manag
ement of that place let us free.
We travelled back home also by a train. After gettin
g on the train I fell asleep instantly and woke up in my home town.