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The following is a journal about my long vacation. Please correct any mistakes or unnatural expressions. ""For the first two days, I stayed home and cleaned my room, and my wife joined a fishing seminar in Nagoya. My son went fishing with his friends in Shizuoka. They did lure fishing. For the rest of Golden Week, my wife and I went stream fishing in Gifu."" Thank you!
18. Mai 2024 00:28
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The following is a journal about my long vacation. Please correct any mistakes or unnatural expressions. ""For the first two days, I stayed home and cleaned my room, and my wife attended a fishing seminar in Nagoya. My son went fishing with his friends in Shizuoka. They went lure fishing. For the rest of Golden Week, my wife and I went stream fishing in Gifu."" Thank you!
Very well written! I would love to learn how to fish.
18. Mai 2024
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The following is a journal about my long vacation. Please correct any mistakes or unnatural expressions. ""For the first two days, I stayed home and cleaned my room, and my wife joined a fishing seminar in Nagoya. My son went lure fishing with his friends in Shizuoka. For the rest of Golden Week, my wife and I went stream fishing in Gifu."" Thank you!
よく書けてますよ✨ 直すところが全然ありませんでした! 「lure fishing」と「stream fishing」という活動を聞いたことがありませんが、とっても楽しそうです🎣 楽しくて良いGolden Weekみたいでよかったですね😊
18. Mai 2024
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