Does this sentence sound natural to you? If not, could you tell me how to correct it?
Which sentence is more natural?
①Hi, xx How are you doing?
I would like to marry an American.
How can I make this happen?
Simply put, appearance is the type.
What do you think about it? or what's are your thoughts?
②Hi, xx How are you doing?
I would like to marry an American and marry her.
simply put, Appearance is the type.
How can I make this happen?
what do you think about it? or what's are your thoughts?

Question

Does this sentence sound natural to you? If not, could you tell me how to correct it? 
Which sentence is more natural?
①Hi, xx How are you doing?
I would like to marry an American.
How can I make this happen?
Simply put, appearance is the type.
What do you think about it? or what's are your thoughts?
②Hi, xx How are you doing?
I would like to marry an American and marry her.
simply put, Appearance is the type.
How can I make this happen? 
what do you think about it? or what's are your thoughts?

Answer

加藤さんこんにちは！ 残念ながら、これらの文のグループはどちらも自然に聞こえません。

ただし、私と無料の個別指導セッションを希望する場合は、それは素晴らしいことです。 これらの文章を自然にする方法を説明します。 私はSkypeを持っていて、少し日本語を話します。 いつの日か、日本で英語を教えることが私の夢です！ :)私たちはお互いに助け合うことができます!!

Answer

Masato, I would like to give you this advice to help you.  To be honest, I don't recommend saying these sentences to an American woman.  Many American women want to be valued for their personality, achievements, and strengths - not just appearance.

Instead, you can say: 
"I'm interested in dating in America.  Do you have any dating tips or advice for me?"