I planned to hang out in a park, I saw a black swan family in the park yesterday, mom, dad and six babies, they are so cute. One person put some vegetables and bun into the bucket, they liked to eat.

Cansle

I planned to hang out in a park, I saw a black swan family in the park yesterday, mom, dad and six babies, they are so cute. One person put some vegetables and bun into the bucket, they liked to eat. I thought she maybe lived around there, she bought some vegetables, meat and breakfast.

30. März 2024 14:21

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I planned to hang out in a park. I saw a black swan family in the park yesterday, mom, dad and six babies. They are so cute. One person put some vegetables and a bun into the bucket, they liked to eat it. I thought she maybe lived around there, she bought some vegetables, meat and breakfast.

The first sentence was a bit long. Better to split them into smaller sentences.

1. April 2024

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