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Cinthya Karina
Right now, I am reading two books. One of them is called “Broca’s brain”. This book is like a reflection about the origin of the universe, the life and evolution of our planet. While you are reading this book, you are learning new things of course, but you also make you more questions. It’s amazing, because since centuries ago, the humans have been trying to answer all these questions. But there are a lot of questions to answer that all the work realized looks like a grain of sand. Humans explore not just the cosmos, we explore our own conscience too. Cosmos is as well deep as our conscience and the relationship between both is incredible. Why are we here? How was born the universe? What is our destiny? Is there life in another planet?
Who hasn’t ever wondered these questions?
Wonderful, isn’t? How our brain works, questioning everything and looking and discovering new things, making new theories and failed in it. Bu the most important, trying over and over again. Definitely, there isn’t a word to describe how a person can feels when reflections like this comes to their head.
22. Jan. 2021 23:29
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Currently, I am reading two books. One of them is called “Broca’s brain”.
This book is an attempt to explain the origins of the universe, the life and the
evolution of our planet. It not only describes many interesting facts, opinions and events ( experiments? Theories?), but it also makes you wonder and ask questions.
It’s amazing, because for centuries humans have been trying to answer the same exact questions.
Humans explore not only the cosmos, we explore our own conscience too. Cosmos is as deep as our conscience and the relationship
between the two is incredible.
Why are we here? How was the universe born? What is our density? ( i am not sure what you mean- I would delete it) Is there life on another planet? Who has never asked themselves these questions?
It is fascinating how our brain works. Isn’t?
It tries to ask and answer questions, observe and discover new things, create new ideas just to dismiss them a moment later. The most important is that it tries to do it over and over again. Definitely, it’s challenging to put into words how a person can feel when reflections like these come to mind.
Good job to attempt to deacribe surely an interesting but complex book.
It would be good if you look at gerund form. It looks you are over using it. Use present simple more. I know you were trying to say that whole you are reading this book such and such things come to your mind. It could work that way:
Whilst I was reading this book, suddenly all these different questions came to my mind and thoughts were swirling around in my head.
Try to write shorter sentences and use more conjunctions- moreover, However, nonetheless etc.
Try not to make methaphorical comparisons in English at the moment. That’s a common mistake for learners. Although it might be relatable in your native language it is confusing to understand for someone whose language does not have the same point of reference. Focus on making your sentences coherent.
Hope it helps
23. Januar 2021
Right now, I am reading two books. One of them is called “Broca’s brain”. This
book is like a reflection about the origin of the universe, the life and
evolution of our planet. While you are reading this book, you are learning new
things of course, but you also make you more questions. It’s amazing, because
since centuries ago, the humans have been trying to answer all these questions.
But there are a lot of questions to answer that all the work realized looks like
a grain of sand. Humans explore not just the cosmos, we explore our own
conscience too. Cosmos is as well deep as our conscience and the relationship
between both is incredible. Why are we here? How was born the universe? What is
our destiny? Is there life in another planet? Who hasn’t ever wondered these
questions? Wonderful, isn’t? How our brain works, questioning everything and
looking and discovering new things, making new theories and failed in it. Bu the
most important, trying over and over again. Definitely, there isn’t a word to
describe how a person can feels when reflections like this comes to their head.
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23. Januar 2021
Right now, I am reading two books. One of them is called “Broca’s brain”. This
book is like a reflection about the origin of the universe, life and the
evolution of our planet. When you read this book, you learn new
things of course, but it also makes you question things. It’s amazing because
since centuries ago, humans have been trying to answer all these questions.
But there are still a lot of unanswered questions. Humans explore not just the cosmos, but our own
conscience too. Cosmos are as deep as our conscience and the relationship
between both is incredible. Why are we here? How was the universe born? What is
our destiny? Is there life in another planet? Who hasn’t ever wondered these
questions? Wonderful, isn’t? How our brain works, questioning everything and
looking and discovering new things, making new theories and failing. But
most importantly, trying over and over again.
There definitely isn’t a word to
describe how a person feels during reflections like these.
23. Januar 2021
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