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It's argued that people not following healthy style should contribute in paying for high medical care cost.
It's argued that people who don't follow healthy style should contribute in paying for high medical care cost.
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In 2010, the percentage of women who smoked is 25.
In 2010, the percentage of women smoked is 25.
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The table classifies different genres of films in terms of number of releases, % of releases and % income from ticket sales in 2012. The numbers show a direct correlation between number of releases in comedy genre with percentage of income: where there are 26 releases with 45.4 % of income.
The numbers demonstrate an inverse correlation between number of releases for documentary, drama and thriller genres with % of income from ticket sales. 35 movies were released of documentary genre in return for 2.9 % of income, and there are 5 releases of drama in return for 0.8 % of income.
The numbers illustrate a moderate correlation for the rest of genres.
14. November 2020
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There is a market that's called Syrian market. The clothes there are cheap with high quality.
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The youth of today are the most affected side by new technology. They didn't get used to it when they were little because the technology wasn't that much advanced. Currently, most jobs are high demanding jobs. It needs people to be able to use modern technology. Youth should develop themselves on a regular basis but that shouldn't take most of their effort and thinking. Most people have jobs for a living but they should have time for recreation.
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People agree about the importance of working out, but they disagree about what kind of exercises we should do. There is a claim that bodybuilding exercises have a negative impact on the body, especially for backbone and joints. People say walking or running for some time in the morning is enough. In my opinion, it's not a problem doing back, chest and other exercises without using weights.
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Some people urge others to wear the mask as a precaution against the spread of Corona virus and blame those who don't do it. The mask and gloves are new things to be worn. They limit people's freedom. Thus, number of people who take/abide by those precautions without being obligatory would be few. What force people to do so is the law. Encouraging people to take necessary precautions has a short term effect. I know that young people are afraid for their parents, especially those who are old and have chronic diseases, but they forget that at first attractive entertainment.
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Relationships end for all sorts of reasons. Ending a relationship, doesn't matter what kind of relationship is, hurts. I guess the most hard, painful one to be ended is love relationship/affair. Anyone who goes deeper in thinking as an attempt to understand the truth about life knows that it's some kind of destiny that some relationships work and some don't. The most important thing is to look at that as a part of destiny. Some people accuse each other of ruining the relationship, and as a result of that thinking, they try to take revenge on the other side. I watched an imaginary story in a horror movie about someone who wanted to get revenge on her deaf-mute ex-girlfriend. That story embodies what sometimes happens in reality.
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Are these sentences correct to express that I rode the bicycle for two years two years ago ?
I went bicycling two years ago.
I rode the bicycle many times two years ago.
I used to ride a bicycle.
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Most people like to work out, but there are
many factors which impede them from doing that. For instance, lacking of lit streets which contain sidewalks for those who like walking , lacking of public services such as washrooms for those who walk for long distance, and high subscription price of going to gyms. Playing sports has an impact on people's health and mood. It provides them with feelings of being strong. It saves them from falling into that dirty world of drugs. Authorities, all over the world, must provide facilities which incite everyone to exercise without paying.
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