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Amritbir Kaur Brar
A child who copies other children may pick up both good and bad habits, so parents should monitor what their children are watching and the type of games they are playing. If the content children are watching is healthy, they should be allowed to watch, and unhealthy content should not be encouraged. Children should be encouraged to watch TV programs and computer games, which they come to know from their friends but are beneficial to them. For example, TV shows aired on channels such as discovery, kingdom planet are very knowledgeable and play a pivotal role in the holistic growth of a child. Not only this, video and computer games do children's brainstorming and increase their creativity; therefore, parents should encourage their children to play such games. However, some TV programs and video games have a negative impact on children, so they should not be allowed to watch them even if their friends see them. There are some TV programs which are not good for children. After watching such programs, children try to imitate them in real life, which has a negative impact on their mental health. For example, recently in News, it was told that 2 children got severely injured as they were performing action filmed in a movie. What is more, playing video games for long hours with friends is affecting the eyesight of children and moreover these games are not at all productive excluding few of them, so a constant check is required. To conclude, parents ought not to let their children blindly watch all TV programs and play computer games, but they should carefully monitor what their children are watching.
8 ago 2022 19:40
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A child who copies other children may pick up both good and bad habits, so parents should monitor what their children are watching and the type of games they are playing. If the content children are watching is healthy, they should be allowed to watch it, while harmful content should not be encouraged. Children should be encouraged to watch TV programs and computer games, which they come to know from their friends but are beneficial to them. For example, TV shows aired on channels such as discovery, kingdom planet are very knowledgeable and play a pivotal role in the holistic growth of a child. Besides this, video and computer games do children's brainstorming and increase their creativity; therefore, parents should encourage their children to play such games. However, some TV programs and video games hurt children, so they should not be allowed to watch them even if their friends see them. There are some TV programs which are not suitable for children. After watching such programs, children try to imitate them in real life, which has a negative impact on their mental health. For example, recently in the News, it was said that 2 children got severely injured as they were performing actions portrayed in a movie. also, playing video games for long hours with friends affects the eyesight of children and these games are not at all productive excluding a few of them, so constant monitoring is required. To conclude, parents ought not to let their children blindly watch all TV programs and play computer games, but they should carefully monitor what their children are watching.
Awesome job with this post!
9 agosto 2022
A child who copies other children may pick up both good and bad habits, so parents should monitor what their children are watching and the type of games they are playing. If the content children are watching is healthy, they should be allowed to watch it, while unhealthy content should not be encouraged. Children should be encouraged to watch TV programs and computer games, which they come to know from their friends but are beneficial to them. For example, TV shows aired on channels such as Discovery Kingdom Planet contain much knowledge and play a pivotal role in the holistic growth of a child. Not only this, but video and computer games also help children's brainstorming abilities and increase their creativity; therefore, parents should encourage their children to play such games. However, some TV programs and video games have a negative impact on children, so they should not be allowed to watch them even if their friends see them. There are some TV programs which are not good for children. After watching such programs, children try to imitate them in real life, which has a negative impact on their mental health. For example, recently in the news, it was reported that 2 children got severely injured as they were performing an action filmed in a movie. What is more, playing video games for long hours with friends is affecting the eyesight of children, and moreover, these games are not at all productive, excluding few of them, so a constant monitoring is required. To conclude, parents ought not to let their children blindly watch all TV programs and play all computer games; instead, they should carefully monitor what their children are watching and playing.
Very well written! Great job
8 agosto 2022
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