my sent sometimes must not be to understand who care you ... that time you understood that you must give your time to who. this sentence is right?

Living in the dormitory Living in the dormitory was one of the best experiences of college so far. But there are many troubles of living in the dorm. We had to do everything ourselves and solve our problems with other. Some trouble that we have in dorm include dirty and voice of roommates, lock of place, old furniture and equipment failure. Also we learn a bad and good experience. It’s an experience to meet new people in your dorm and your floor. That People have different behavior and different culture. One of problem that there are among roommates is noise and study’s hours and sleep’s hours for example some of them go to bed early and other roommate want to wake all night. Another problem is cleanliness, some of them don’t do duty correctly and make quarrel among them. In Jahrom, building of many dorm and furniture such cooler and fireplace, these are old and these are not new. In summer, sometimes we had to bear hot weather. Also we have a small and old refrigerator to twelve, this reason that our foods are decay and we always have lack place. please tell my mistake.

what does mean the poem below? there was an old man who supposed that the street door was partially closed but some very large rats,ate his coats and his hats while that futile old gentleman dozed

Cause and effect paragraph For some time now, many women working outside the home. There are many reasons for this work. Majority of them, working for earn addition money and to have better life. Another reason , this is Society need that women sometime working outside home because some work are special women and they can do this of jobs better than men like nurse and sometime they work such men like firefighters and we need to have both of sexes. The third reason that I think that many women working, to promotion station of them in society. These reasons show women have high capacity and they can work outside like men and they can undertake many jobs. It’s very good that women working outside home but we don’t forget that main duty’s women is training of their children.

compare and contrast paragraph many people think twin are similar in many character like face and moral but we pay attention to it is not truth.i have a twin uncle , they have simile their face together specially when they were child. now, if you see them first time , you think that they don't have any differently but you look accuracy , you can find different in their face also they are different in moral. Ben is very calm and he always try to solve his problem with speaking although Shun is rash and hot temper. he always begin and quarrel to people do his order . they also are different in their favorite food and game. in spite of are twin .only simile human is their different together. please say my mistake in this paragraph.

Are mobile phones useful for children? Mobile phone is a means to connect. Today everyone have one mobile phone and keep in touch with friend and family member and service emergency.it haven’t mobile phone make far from the technology. Also people are busy by mobile phone and don’t have time to visit together and just visit together online. Mobile phone help to us communicate and connect us to the world. Mobile phone help to improve knowledge and information technology although it devote our most of time and we make addict. One of disadvantage use of mobile phone is haven’t enough time to do duty and study and all time devote to phone and it’s addicted. They can be upset if the phone’s taken away mobile phone became part of their life. In this term that you spent time with mobile phone, you don’t learn necessary skill for your life. You spend your all time to speak with contact at your phone in your room. If not communicate with other because they used to be with their mobile phone. We must teach our teenager that mobile phone is means to aid in emergency situation, having ability to call an emergency service in case of accident or towing service in case of tire blowout while driving. Many new phone also include GPS location technology, allowing parent to pinpoint the location of their children or to locate lose or phone. please, tell me my mistake

sleepless Today, sleepless and lack of sleep are problems epidemic and public. Study, work, have funs, Concerns are the reason lock of sleep that its make bad influence on body and soil. We must set out sleeps hours to have a power and energy in during a day. Sleep disorder make that we don’t do daily word correctly. Sleep is a basic need of human and we must pay attention it mostly. In following you read about influence lock of sleep: Researches show that lock of sleep make petulance. Research on volunteers that haven’t enough time for sleep or suffer sleeplessness than other that have good sleep, they are petulancy and impatient. This research observe that these volunteers have reaction briskly toward some problem like when they are working and someone will want to annoy them

punish children 2 Although you think punish is good for some children, its bad. Some parent when come back home and see their child that don’t do homework, start to blame them. physically punish and cut off love use to some children by parents to they induce duty correctly and listen to speech their parent. We must know that punish not right way to discipline children. Punish have an irreparable harm. We can encourage children to do their duty and teach them that have polite and respect toward others. There are positive ways to train children and remember their mistake. If we couldn’t influence with love that do work, we couldn’t influence with other things.can you tell me

punish children Punishment of children is correct or wrong? We must punish children but how we must punish them? Today, many of parent use to encourage our children than punish. Other parent were thinking punishment is good to discipline children whether other parent were thinking punishment is bad and they just encourage our children and they oppose punishment hardly special physical punishment. Sometimes punish is necessary to some kinds that are fearless and gritty. They do every word and don’t think is correct or wrong, dangerous and safe also children that don’t think to their parent and pertinence. Parent could punish physical or deprive their love. Maybe punish is useful in this condition but we must know that punishment make children that lock of their confidence and fear of do new work and don’t it because is they do wrong, they were punish by parent also children under five years don’t apperceive punishment correctly. They just try to not blame by parent. These children when grow up, they use of punishment to discipline other people and have life of full of violence. In past, children are polite and respect the other people special parent and teacher. They tried to do everything correctly and on time. Children live in past are politely and better than children that live in now because they were punished by parent in home and teacher in school also now, some parent that use of punish to train their children. They are polite and obedient. They respect their parent and their teacher. We must know that some children that were punished by parents, they have obedient as long as haven’t power. Only definition for same children is (unable enemy).maybe we reach our goal or purpose with punishment easily and quickly but it’s a ghost and it spoil early. Also that people have a power and mighty abuse these children a lot of. You must be aware of complication punish of children. Not able solve the problem with others and he alter a avenger and negativism person.