correct my mistakes please What would you change about your hometown? I was born in Trabzon and I still live there. Trabzon is very small city about 20.000 people reside. Moreover all my family, relative and friends still live in this city. One day if I have a opportunity, I would like to change several things. Firstly, I would built couple school and university because of education. Education is the most important power all over the world. I believe if my hometown has a lot of school we will make money or built house so basically we can get better life condition after that we will be more happy and peaceful than pass. For example, when we look at the development country in the world, they have very high education rate and this status make them happy and more cultured. Secondly, I would open couples factory around the city to help to people finding a easy job and make money. If city has enough workshop, this mean there are a lot of positive opportunity such as decrease unemployment rate, bringing money into the city and so forth. Furthermore, another important advantage is, the people might improved their skills than start opening their own store and company. Lastly, I would open more public hospital because my hometown has only three hospitals. In our day, healthy staff is very expensive such as insurance, medicine therefore if There are enough hospital, the doctor can help the patient right a way and treat their problem as soon as possible. For example in our city there are onlyt three hospital. If the patient goes at the hospital, the registration give them appointment and this meeting takes time between patient and doctor even sometimes they could not get any treatment. To conclude, There are three important facts what I mention upper the article. I am certainly change those three things if I have a opportunity because those three factors are made to people more happy and peaceful. That is the reason I would change those because the most important things for me, I want to see my neighbored living on the good condition while they are happy.

correct my mistakes please In former time, many illiterate human had broke down syndrome because of lacking of information and also this type person was not sure of oneself so that mental disorder illness rate was more than now. On this occasion the Turkish ministry of health established regulations such as opening a new library and support all families to send their children at school to be bringing up more informed children for real future If only I had had one child instead of two My team can not win championship as long as transfer the new forward I will give you my car one condition that gas up Supposing that I have 1 million $ than I will buy a car for you Even if I have money, I wont give you any cents By no means I do not go her birthday party He told me he was being attached It is generally that I am hungry could you return the car before its time how pretty she is, she has long beautiful hair what a wonderful day, there are not any cloud on the sky He always attempt aggression when does not smoke. That’s why I am always telling him to have medical treatment for smoking withdrawal My co-workers always irritate me. He thinks he is very funny. Unlike he is not I have to pay my electric bills other wise they will cut down my electric system I don’t feel very well nevertheless I will go school tomorrow I bough some supplement in order that loosing weight

correct my mistakes please In the last two decades; human was uninformed due to lacking technologies. Now scientists make n invention easier than past also they reach the information very quick and use very fast because of information technologies is very accessible. Therefore are two important benefits of technologies. First one is accessible information. Second one is cheap. First of all, before computer came into our life, there were too many new invention could not come up because of lacking of commination or budget. If now if some scientist invention something than share on the Internet his invention right a way and invention might come up and being famous or receivable. Likewise if you need any information just type on the Internet and than it poop out instantly. Second things, before using internet, if you want to learn any information, you have to pay but know you can find everything on the internet and free. For instance when I was in university. I would like to learn Spanish and I called to some Spanish course and asked their beginner Spanish course price and the course employer told me that, it was the 500$ three level. I though its very expansive and I gave up to learn Spanish. On the other hand I wanted to improve my English writing skills and I did nor search any course directly I typed free online course on the internet and found amazing free writing course and now my English is much better than last year and best part is free. Conclusion, Computer is best tool in human life to learn and improve yourself furthermore this technologies tolls is getting more useful day by day

correct my mistakes please Plant earth seem to destroy by human beings Nowadays the world has ruined by people and getting worse day to day. Today there are 4 billions people lives all around the world moreover birth rate is going up ever year. Thus consuming is increased by human therefore everything is changing as technology, car industry, food industry, physic ad so forth. So that; Human have destroyed the world getting more goods and equipment. Chine has biggest population in the world about 1.2 billion people levies in china. In addition it; China investors builds new house and facility but how they do? They cut down some forest than built house in that place. If now 20% china’s people is getting lunch cancer because of cutting trees. Second most important destroy is used gas or oil. Today each per person has consumed 124-litters oil each year. Oil creates carbon dioxide and carbon dioxide effect to vegetation and animal world very badly. For example last year in china “Balik” type of bird become extinct because of air population. To sum up, All the government all around the world should stops annihilation very soon because if they don’t, next generation might have problems such as disease, cancer, disability etc.

correct my mistakes please IN adulthood, it is quite youngsters to get influenced by their friends Nowadays raise a child is getting more difficult than past. Most of the family tries to find out several ways to raise wonderful children. Today certainly young generation be impressed by their friends because young people spends more time with their friends in school or other places. This influenced could be negative or positive but its certain. For example when I was in high school. That time tomas and me were very close friends. We used to like each other very much and we did everything together even if had a problem such as money, girlfriends and so forth. One day I saw him while he was smoking cigarette and I was shock because I never has not seen him when he smoke after that he gave me once and told me you should try but I could not want to try because I was thinking this is horrible idea and if my family knew they may get angry to me but I smoked because tomas was the one of my best friends and I did not heart his heart that’s why I smoked. Finally I have been smoking since when tomas gave me once Sum up young people get very easy influenced from other people or their friends therefore family should meet their children friends and pursue them what they do and where they go with who

correct my mistakes please I was very angry to him in spite of I went to his birthday Despite working hard I did not hire in my company I studied all night in spite of power failure I could not buy those shoes because of money I did not prepare the exam last night because of you Because of government tax policy I could not pay my rent I am very sick due to cold weather He went to Alaska next year due to his girlfriend My car the some color as yours He is not so logical as you They came to see whether we are ready or not We don’t know whether Mark makes a proposal to his girlfriend As soon as he saw her, He left I wanted to see you as soon as, I have time When I came in the office as my best friends left As you do not have enough money, you should spent much money for buying expensive clothes I no sooner ate my hamburger than, I left I no sooner got into bed than, I slept By the time you save that much money to buy this house, this house will be sell Once you try my mom food, U will come my family house every day You must wait here till buss come here I wont be here until 5 o’clock I never eat apple as long as I live I don’t go any football match for most of the audience swears so badly I bought glasses so that, I can read book more clearly I took more money in case you don’t have enough I took my jacket in case, It will rain I do not go out at night for fear that some criminal might be kidnapped me He is so poor that, He could not feed his son He has such a lot of money that, he bought his wife Ferrari for marriage anniversary

correct my mistakes please At the present time birth rate have decreased in most developed nations each passing day and researchers calculates that develop countries populations one-third will be aged 65 and over therefore those develop countries try to find some solution in order that be hurt. I think develop countries government should do something before this happen for example The government should pay the community who get a new baby and second advise; give the poor country children opportunity to have confer citizenship Firstly; If government support and pay the family who have a baby than they might get rid of this situation for instance some of the people would not get a baby because living conditions is very expensive at the moment therefore they would not want getting a baby but if the government give the family social welfare or tax refund after this most of the family may change their idea regarding get a baby Secondly, There are many poor country all around the world and most of the poor country family can not feed their baby or children so that develop government should give confer citizenship to these baby or children after that develop country could survive the their future as well as poor country baby Imagine one country there are not young population who is going to work and pay tax to save the future of the country therefore develop government should hurry to find out some solution for this happen

correct my mistakes please those two charts shows us to development of world population There are two charts; First table shows development of world population in between 1880 to 2100. Second table shows development of urban population in between 2005 to 2030 furthermore second table shows two different sections, which are developed regions and developing regions. First graph shows world population had been increasing till 2050 and the among of population about 9 billions and than world population will have decreased rapidly about 7 millions. Second table shows; developed regions have dropped down respectively 20005 to 2030 and the among of urban population 1.3 million to 1.1 million have been falling. The other section, which shows developing regions have been increasing till 2005 to 2030. In 2005 number of developing person was 2.4 million but in 2030 this number will have increased 4 million Last word The new generation prefers to live in developing regions instead of developed regions

I need huge help please Türkiye deprem olma riski olan bir bölgede yer almaktadır .Depremin yıkıcı kayıplara sebep olmaması yada en az kayıplar ile atlatılabilmesi için yönetmelikler geliştirilmiş ve bu gelişim oluşan depremlerin etkisi ile daha da gelişim göstermiştir.Bu dönem aralığında ki yönetmelikler incelendiğinde; Türkiye’nin 4 farklı deprem bölgesine ayrılmıştır.betonarme yapılarında yük hesaplarının yapıldığı gözlenmiştir. Bu dönem aralığında engelli ulaşımı ile ilgili Türkiye ‘de pek bir çalışmanın yapılmadığı engelli ulaşımı konusunda Türkiye’de 90 li yıllardan sonra gelişimin olduğu belirlenmiştir. Bu dönem aralığında yapılan konferans ve çalışmalarda sürdürülebilirlik kavramı sürekli geliştirilmiştir. binaların enerji ,su ve malzeme adına etkin kullanımlarını belirleyen bina sertifikalandırma sistemleri oluşturulmuş tur. Bu dönem içerisinde deprem ile ilgili gelişmelere bakıldığında; yaşanan 99 depremi ile birlikte yaşanan birçok can ve mal kaybından dolayı ;yönetmeliklerde gelişmeler olmuştur. Engelli ulaşımında ; bu dönemde yapılan 1996 AB engellilik stratejisi belgesi ile birlikte Türkiyedeki yönetmeliklere Engelliler ile ilgili birçok maddeler eklenmiş oldu. Yönetmeliklere; TS 12576 -Özürlü ve Yaşlılar İçin Tesislerde Tasarım Kuralları, TS 9111 -Özürlü İnsanların İkamet Edeceği Binaların Düzenlenmesi Kuralları getirildi Bu dönemde sürdürülebilirlik kavramı; yaşam çevresi, çevresel kaynaklar ve üretimin dengeli bir şekilde kullanılarak sürdürülebilir bir yaşam ortamı ve sürdürülebilir bir ekonomik ilerleme sağlanabilecek bir fikir olarak savunulmaya başlanmıştır.Ayrıca; enerji ,su ve malzeme etkin kullanımının neleri içerdiği yönetmeliklere eklenmiştir Bu dönemde yapılan yönetmeliklerde 99 depreminden sonraki etkiler görülmüş ve yönetmeliklere ;DASK(zorunlu deprem sigortası) , binaların yapı denetim şirketlerince denetleneceği;uygulanmayan yönetmeliklerde cezai işlemler arttırılmış;bölgesel yapılandırılmalar başlamış,binada kullanılacak malzemeler yönetmeliklere detaylı olarak eklenmiştir. Engelliler için ; Yönetmeliklere giren yasarların uygulanması zorunlu hale getirilmiş ;sıkıdenetimler