Is there any mistake in this paragraph? I was really sad before my senior 1 since I was still a primary school student, because I found that my life can’t be eternal. What I love and who love me will disappear one day, and I have no way to keep them even myself. I like thinking, and always think too much. I spent many years thinking about life. I am sentimental but also rational. I love exploring the essence of the fantastic world. I hate being cheated by the fake appearance and stupid thought.

Could you please check this? Thank you~ NOTARIAL CERTIFICATE Applicant:+++, female, born on +++, citizen’s identity number: +++++. Notarial Item: the Conformity of Translated Copy and the Original This is to certify that the English translated copy of the preceding (2015) NSZi, No.566, “NOTARIAL CERTIFICATE” is in conformity with the Chinese original copy.

Could you check this?Please~ The student is the native of +++ District, +++ City, +++ Province, studied at our school from September 2012 to June 2015, With qualified results in required credits, Academic Proficiency Test and comprehensive quality evaluation, hereby she is granted to graduate.

CHECK IT, PLEASE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 7)In the Academic Proficiency Test results, Chinese, Maths, English, Politics, History, Geography, Pyhsics, Chemistry, Biology, Information Technology, General Technology results are divided into brilliant, good, qualified, unqualified, represented by A, B, C, D in order. In the Comprehensive Quality Evaluation, Moral Trait, Citizenship Literacy, Communication and Cooperation Ability are divided into qualified and still needing to work hard, “H” represents qualified, “S” represents still needing to work hard. Study Capacity, Sport and Health and Aesthetic and Performance are divided into brilliant, good, qualified,unqualified, represented by A, B, C, D in order.

Check my translation,please ^ ^ 1)the special steel seal for school roll of general senior high school of ... City ... Province ...省...市普通高中学籍专 用章 2)Aesthetic and Performance 审美与表现 3）Acquired Credits 获得的学分 4）Comprehensive Quality Evaluation Grade 综合素质评价等级 5）Comprehensive Quality Evaluation Grade 学业水平考试成绩 6）There should be the special seal for Academic Proficiency Test of general senior high school of Sichuan Provincial Department of Education and the seal of Municipal Education Administrative Department to get valid.

Is there any problem with following words as one part of a certificate? I will be very grateful~ 1. This is to certify that..., female, born on 24th February 1997, studied at ... from September 2012, now has completed all courses of High school. Her academic transcripts are as follow: 2.Total points 3.Senior 1 1st Term 4.Class No. 4 5.Annotation： Grading system in our school：In Senior 1 1st term, the maximum score for all the subjects is 100. In Senior 1 2nd term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 120, that for the others is 100. In Senior 2, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 150, that for the others is 100. In Senior 3 1st term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Maths is 150, that for Physics is 110, that for Chemistry is 100, that for Biology is 90. (Students were separated into Liberal Arts and Science classes in Senior 1 2nd term, so there is no Liberal Arts academic achievements.)

Our school grading system Our school grading system：In Senior 1 the first term, the maximum score for all the subjects is 100. In Senior 1 the second term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Mathematics is 120, that for the others is 100. In Senior 2, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Mathematics is 150, that for the others is 100. In Senior 3 the first term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Mathematics is 150, that for Physics is 110, that for Chemistry is 100, that for Biology is 90. (Students were separated into Liberal Arts and Science classes in Senior 1 the second term, so there is no Liberal Arts academic achievements.

I want to know if the translation is correct. Our school grading system：In Senior 1 the first term, the maximum score for all the subjects is 100. In Senior 1 the second term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Mathematics is 120, that for the others is 100. In Senior 2, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Mathematics is 150, that for the others is 100. In Senior 3 the first term, the maximum score for Chinese, English, Mathematics is 150, that for Physics is 110, that for Chemistry is 100, that for Biology is 90. (Students were separated into Liberal Arts and Science classes in Senior 1 the second term, so there is no Liberal Arts academic achievements.

Thanks a million~Translate this into formal English, please~ 说明：高一上各科100分制；高一下除语数外120分制外，其余各科100分制；高二上除语数外150分制外，其余各科100分制；高二下除语数外150分制外，其余各科100分制；高三上除语数外150分制外，物理110分制，化学100分制，生物90分制。(高一下时已经文理分科，没有计算文科科目。)