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Excercise on September 23th. Please help me correct this excercise below. Thank you very much.
How many hours do you spend to use Social Media per a day?. Are you addicted social media?
These days, many people stay at home because of covid 19 so most of their activities are associated with Internet. Before the pandemic has outbroken, we had quite lots of outside activities like meeting friends, picnic, travelling,… but now we are not allowed to do these things. That may makes us irritated and annoyed.
Internet is the only way to help us entertain but when spending much time for that, we can be addicted easily. Although I try to limit on the time of using Social Media, sometimes I almost lost control surfing Facebook, Youtube and others.
Everyday, I spend an average of 2 hours on Social media or even 5 or 6 hours. That’s really bad for my health, especially eyes. To limit on using, I uninstall all of social media applications on my cellphone and don’t log in Facebook and Youtube anymore. I spend more spare time for cooking, cleaning and gardening.
The size of my house is not enough for a garden but there has a terrace about 15 meter square in the third floor. My parents have planted many kinds of bonsai for 6 years. That place is really nice for doing meditation and seeing sunset.
Social Media brings to us lots of benefits for working, studying and relaxing. However, if we waste our time for worthlessness, that will have negative effects very seriously. There are lots of ways that can make you independent on the Internet so much.
27 settembre 2021
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Hello you guys!
I'm looking for partners who want to improve English speaking skill. I think that practice usually is the best way to enhance.
Don't hesitate to contact me. I hope we can help each other a lot.
Thank you so much and have a nice day!
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Exercise on September, 6th.
Please help me correct this excercise, I appreciate your help.
"Have you ever believed in fortune tellers?
Most of people around me tend to believe in guides from fortune tellers completely when any troubles happen out of the blue.
They think every one's fate is decided by Gods and just fortune tellers will help them better.
I take the view that it's hard to say that their perception is correct or unquestioning. However, everything happens due to some reasions from our behaviors and thoughts.
So first of all, you have to understand yourself and consider each actions or speech carefully. Second, looking for reasons and figuring out the way to make better. After all, everything will be solved in the best way. Also we can enhance our problem solving skill.
Belive in yourself! "
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Exercise on September, 6th.
Please help me correct this excercise, I appreciate your help.
"Have you ever believed in fortune tellers?
Most of people around me tend to believe in guides from fortune tellers completely when any troubles happen out of the blue.
They think every one's fate is decided by Gods and just fortune tellers will help them better.
I take the view that it's hard to say that their perception is correct or unquestioning. However, everything happens due to some reasions from our behaviors and thoughts.
So first of all, you have to understand yourself and consider each actions or speech carefully. Second, looking for reasons and figuring out the way to make better. After all, everything will be solved in the best way. Also we can enhance our problem solving skill.
Belive in yourself! "
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I'm writing a passage about the Covid-19 pandamic situation in my city.
If I make mistakes or my expression doesn't make sense, please give me your advices. Thank you so much!
"My city has been imposed a lockdown since the beginning of August in an effort to control and quarantine the center of an outbreak of Covid-19 pandemic.Citizens are not allowed to go out, except polices, military and people who are assigned to manage a residential area.
Everyday, my city records around 50 to 100 infected people in public and isolation area. To ensure that no one has to face with food shortage, each household lists kinds of food and other necessaries and send to supporters. And after 3 days, they will be received them.
The city government has been also imposed a special supporting policy for the poor and vagabond. These people is given rice, meat and other necessaries for free.
During 3 weeks, we’ve tried our best to prevent the spread of Covid-19. We hope that Covid-19 Vaccine is inoculated widely in the city and
everything will be stable soon."
#helpmecorrect
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Hello you guys!
I'm looking for partners who want to improve English speaking skill. I think that practice usually is the best way to enhance.
Don't hesitate to contact me. I hope we can help each other a lot.
Thank you so much and have a nice day!
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Hello you guys!
I'm going to interview on this week so I prepared a short introduction below. If I make any mistakes or don't make sense, please help me correct. Thank you so much.
"Hello.
First of all, I’d like to thank you for taking the time to interview.
As you can see in my CV, my name is Min. I was borned and raised in Hitty city. I graduated from Hitty University of Economics, major in Corporate Finance. After graduation, I had 2 years working in customer service at Naman resort and invena limited company. During that time, I gained experiences in sales, support, care and solve problems with clients from domestic and abroad.
Currently, I’m working as a project manager at BPO.MP limited company. Here, I undertook to negotiate, make contracts, orders and other confidentiality agreements. Cordinated with other departments to operate, as well as ensure International Organization for Standardization for each projects. Besides that, I also support the company’s collective activities like birthdays, teambuidings, company trips.
During the period of studying and working, I always improve English and computer science so I can use the skills proficiently.
I find myself a very creative and open-minded person, it’s very easy for me to think of new and different ideas at the same time. Everytime, when I have to face with issues, I always try my best to figure out a way to make it even better."
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Hello you guys!
I'm writting a description for my working experience in my CV
Please help me correct it to make sound more natural and exact.
"Position: Project manager
Job description:
+ Working with big data institutes, software companies from domestic and abroad.
+ Negotiating requirements, quality, cost and deadline of the projects.
+ Compiling service providers, make reports to compare quotes to choose a suitable one.
+ Making contracts, orders and other confidentiality agreements.
+ Ensure legal and confidential information when implementing the projects.
+ Monitoring progress of payment.
+ Cordinating with other departments to operate.
+ Always ensure International Organization for Standardization for each project.
+ Going on a business trip to meet and discuss directly with partners.
+ Supporting related to Sales&Marketing.
+ Support the company's collective activities (Holidays, birthdays, teambuilding...)"
Thank you so much for your help.
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I'm writing a job description for a new position that my company is recruiting. Please help me correct to make sense and more natural.
Thank you in advance!
"Position: Coordinator
Job description:
+ Assist in coordination of outgoing medicines and other types of pharmaceuticals.
+ Ensure meet the quality and quantity, as well as security standard as in the orders.
+ Solve issues arising during the process of importing, exporting and inventorying. "
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Hello you guys
I'm Min from Vietnam. I've joined Italki since 2015 when I was a sophomore student. However, after graduating from university I've been really busy so I 've not able to practice English like before.
Recently, I'm planning to practice English and Chinese to prepare for my new job. If you're also looking for a enthusiast to help each other, please contact me.
Thank you so much and have a nice weekend!
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