My English practice - 0910 Title : I love Katana !! I like Japanese Katana, I like its shape of blade, blade pattern, guard, grip, and I like the black one best. Sometime I’ll watch movie which are about Katana or Samurai, but I don’t like the spirit of Bushido because it always give oppressive feeling. I like to see the ronin or samurai using katana to kill people ( I mean, kill bad guys ^^ ). I request my old brother to use 3D-Max to build a Katana to give me, and it was so beautiful. Hope one day, I’ll buy one the katana which doesn’t edge. Please point out my mistakes, thank you! Chinese version : 我愛武士刀 我喜歡日本武士刀，喜歡它的刀行、刀紋、劍柄、刀握，最愛黑款。 有時候我都在看跟武士刀或武士有關的電影，但是我不喜歡它們的武士精神，給我一種很壓抑的感覺。 我喜歡看浪人或武士用武士刀砍人(我是指，壞人) 我有拜託我哥用3D-MAX幫我做一把刀，它蠻好看的。 希望有一天，我會買一把未開鋒的刀。 ( 這不是中翻英，中文是我寫給外國人士看得如果它們想學的話，這中文是給改英文的人參考的，英文才是我原味的寫作 )謝謝

Misunderstanding!! To XXXXXXX : Sorry, I didn't realize it would cause you any problems, please forgive me. I type the sentences in Skype chat room that they didn’t have tone, and it’s a bit difficult to create some English sentence. I go to a web to find someone to correct my English writhing, but sometimes my some of writings had no helper to correct it, so I’ll give to you my writing to correct, but today, I don’t know you can’t use microphone, and I don’t have any more writing to give to you today, and there only can type English, it’ll limit my talking skill, will cause me give you some mistake talking, and I’m not angry, I want give you some of my question, but my problem are all Chinese+English that I want it all become English sentence, but your cell phone can’t receive Chinese, so I don’t have any question to ask you today. And this is my first time see this situation that I thought it was an online talking, if it is, that will allow me to ask Chinese+English question, but it isn’t, so I said “I don’t know what to do when I wait your reply”, ”and I want you chose another time” , and if I have English question, I can just type they and log out Skype to let you help my sentence and correct it, but like I said, this is my first time see this situation, all I have just Chinese+English question, I didn’t prepare any English question, my question that contain two language, so in this situation I don’t know how to ask you question. After this if you can’t talk in Skype then I’ll just send you English question such as writing, and we happy, not angry, I have to cook lunch, take care. Bye Can Please , point out my mistake of writing, thank you!!

I haven’t received your message yet!! Do your skype could store history message? Because I haven’t received your reply for two day, and that will cause me to wait blind. I have some idea : 1. Every time we chose two day in a week for using skype, each day talk one hour ( over one hour, I will not concentrate on our speaking ). 2. If you have something to come up, we can cancel the day which we chose. ( we don’t have to change the day which we cancel ) 3. You can chose the day from your Monday to Thursday, and Sunday, so it’s my day from Monday to Friday, remember that my time is earlier than yours by thirteen hour. 4. I will check my skype message every Sunday morning at twelve p.m., to make sure what day you chose. 5. You can chose the time from your eight p.m. to nine p.m. , it’s better that you chose your time of night. ( I have to cook lunch at eleven a.m. , so we can’t chose ten p.m. in your local time) 6. My friend, don’t be late, I’ll wait at least fifteen minutes, so don’t forget it!! Note : please point out my mistake, or help my sentence to become more fluent, and thank you for your help.

some sentence of question Today I want to practice some sentence of question, plz point out my mistake, thank you!!! 1. What is brand of your watch? My watch’s brand is Rolex. 2. What is your job in this hospital? My job is security guard. 3. What is your major in college? I major in electronic engineering. 4. Who is your girlfriend between the three guys that in front of us? The middle one. 5. Who is the best teammate of them you think? Everyone. 6. Who is the king of the iron throne in the end of “Game of Throne”? This novel is not finished yet. 7. Where were you parked your car? That one in the left corner. 8. Where were you going after the dinner party yesterday? My mother had something urgent to me. 9. Where my guitar? You ask me, I ask whom? 10. Which country had you been before? I haven’t been yet. 11. Which color of PS4 you like the best? The white one. 111111   12. Which breed of dog you like? Labrador. 13. When you bought this computer? in July fourteen this year. 14. When did you call me on cell phone? About two hour before. 15. When you broken up with your ex-girlfriend? I don’t want to mention that. 16. How did you finish the book that has over five hundreds pages in just one day? Keep concentrating. 17. How did you and your girlfriend acquainted with each other before? I was initiative to pursue her. 18. How could you do that without conscience? As long as the world can be changed, I will do that, whatever it takes. Note : I have a question, “pleasure doing business” , pleasure => V. doing => N. business N. why can this three world become a sentence? Thank you.

World of Warcraft - 2 I hadn’t been play the “Warcraft” for three years, and then I joined the “World of Warcraft”. My first character was Orc, and my Orc’s class was warrior, and when entered into this world, there were just a few of new player in the village. Everything were amazing and mysterious, because this was the one of fantastic game that I first played in online game. One day I traveled into a land which full of forest, wild animal, suddenly, there became more and more trees, animals and each trees were more high and high, oh that was the land of Night-Elf, called “Ashen-vale”, it was the best one of my favorite place. thanks

World of Warcraft - 1 One day, I went to take a walk, and I went the bookstore which was in a short distance from my house, and I entered the store, I saw the computer game “World of Warcraft: The Frozen Throne” which hung on the wall, and thought for a moment, why it looked so familiar, suddenly, I remembered that my father bought the home video game console, called “Saturn”, there had a game called “Warcraft : Orcs and Humans”, that’s why it seemed so similar, and then I bought it, when I came to home, I installed it, then I found I can’t play it, because it just a expansion pack, so I had to by the first pack, “Warcraft 3”, so that I can play it. thanks

You think what you think is right? When I sell items, I’ll meet some people who have some opinions for my price, and they will say “hey/hi, your price are over-priced, it just one hundred US dollars”, but I think they can be three hundred dollars because my commodities are out of print, and if you talking that to the people in the trade room will be a provocative act, and if I sell them in low-priced, there will be two kind of people buy it, one is people who want save their money so buy them in low-priced, second is trader who want buy it low and sell it high, so I don’t know which people you are, I don’t waste my chance to let the another trader earn money, because it’s my opportunity, you can’t stop me. Note: is there have different between “goods” and “commodity” ? and is there have different in “opportunity” and “chance”? when I play game, someone say “ what’s up “ to me , I said “hi “ ( I know I can said “ what’s up” ), he tell me he never use “hi” , he said “ hi is used in friends or we are making friends, is that true? It any problem that said “hi” ? I don’t know, plz help me :D thank you for your attention

basketball I like play basketball, I play basketball when I was fourth grade in elementary school. There is a gymnasium near my house, and I always went to there play basketball, there were many good player, I played with them every time, and I had gymnasium key so I can go to here in any time. When I was first years in my high school, I had a classmate who’s basketball skills were stronger than me, and I learn from him so much, every day we played basketball when we after school, so we know each other when we played basketball together. Note : can someone explan what different between “notebook entry” and “notebook”? cuz I can’t image what is notebook entry, entry is some kind of way to go, it means link? Thank you for your attention

my motocycle I have a motocycle, and when I graduate from high school, I drive my moto to my college when I moved to the college dorm, and I always drove my moto to go home, it cost me one point five hour, and I always drove under the bridge that the bridge is next to riverside, and I can see the view, big road, some race car on the way, and I drove this way already three years, so I saw the different view in every season, and sometimes I drove in the typhoon day as well, it was a very memorable experience. Remark: I don’t know which is better between this “I always drove my moto to go home” and “I always go home by driving the moto”. And the one point five hour I don’t want to write into 1.5 h, because I want practice my pronunciation, but I don’t know it current or not.