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Hey! Would be grateful if sb could check my IELTS Writing Task 1 response to the question on the pics: Many thanks in advance, and here is the essay: The line graph provides information about the correlation between age and crime in the UK last year, whereas the pie chart illustrates the disaggregation of crime by type. Overall, youngsters were most likely to commit crimes, unlike people from other age categories. The most common crimes were related to violence, while public order crimes made up the smallest share. The line graph shows that youth aged 12 to 28 years broke the law more often, unlike individuals from other age groups. While the highest number of crimes (almost one million) was committed by people aged 20, children up to 12 years were the least likely to be perpetrators. Moreover, individuals older than 28 years were also less prone to engage in crimes. Regarding the pie chart, violent crimes were the most prevalent, making up almost half of all offences. Public order crimes, however, accounted for only 9%. Property and drug-related crimes had similar levels at just under 25%.
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