Dear Italki tutors, Would be grateful if you could check my response to the IELTS Writing Task 1 question. The task: The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. My answer: The line graphs illustrate imports of New Zealand from Australia and Japan over a ten-year period from 1994 to 2004. Overall, throughout the given period, the value of goods imported from Australia was higher than the one from Japan. While imports from Australia went up, Japan exhibited a reverse downward trend. Regarding imports from Australia, at the beginning of the given period, New Zealand imported goods worth 4 billion New Zealand dollars. The figures fluctuated over time, and since 2002, the value of imports was constantly rising, standing at 8 billion NZ dollars in 2004. When looking at imports from Japan, we can see that initially, in 1994, its exports to New Zealand were worth 3 billion NZ dollars, and the trend was upward. However, in 1997 and 2000, there were two noticeable dips. By the end of the given period. New Zealand imported the lowest value of goods from Japan worth 2 billion NZ dollars. Many thanks in advance, and have a nice day✨️

Rain showers today meant a change of plans for our performance – it was moved indoors to the mall! Surprisingly, and it totally made sense, the crowd was even bigger than expected. Mom's best friend was a lifesaver, helping me with my hair and makeup. Despite the rain, I felt warm and confident. My part went flawlessly – no shivers or stage fright here! A few kids who went up before me seemed scared, one even looked close to getting sick. But I held my nerve, and guess what? I was the first to get applause! My teacher was beaming with pride, and I couldn't have felt happier. This was a true triumph!

I'm sure it's not sugar that is dangerous, but amounts of it consumed. You can kill yourself with plain water if you somehow manage to drink 10 liters of it at once. As for sugar, I realized that almost every food contains it, so there's no point to add raw sugar into food. For example, I stopped drinking tea with sugar a while ago and discovered, that green tea is much better without it. Moreover, all other food that tastes sweet became times more sweeter to me, so I just can't consume, say, many candies anymore because of this effect. Raw sugar dulls your taste of sweet, so I highly recommend to stop consuming it. Even just for the sake of better taste, not health.

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I don’t know if person can acquire being petulant over time, but I just faced people who are petulant by their nature, since they were babies.

On a normal weekday, I got on the train (Yamanote line in Tokyo) wearing a costume of Detroit Metal City, Johannes Krauser II.

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Any correction is helpful!😉 Why are we learning a new language? I believe it's to share, connecting and socializing. We are human beings and such as, we need to get relationships with our peers or rather fellow men. We live in the same planet; we have the same physiological needs; at times we need a special help which only another human being can give; while other times we must give that so important help to other people. Why study a language everyday? Is it so to talk with a machine with artificial intelligence or for getting a kind of relationship with somebody else? Perhaps we are learning a new language for working, businesses, or whatever; but, my point is that a new language help us to share more of what really we are. Meeting language partners or teachers is more than just studying, it's part of the science to learn a new language. We are in the same boat; so, let's enjoy this journey!

• I’ve just joined the gym that is close to my house • That is the lady, whom I gave the legal document. (alla quale, non “la quale”) • There are many cycle lanes in the city, which are perfect for safe cycling. • I can’t stand neither of whom is jogging in the rain. • Tina is really outdoorsy, which is something we have in common. • Frank is the trainer, whose team made it to the National final. (possession) • That’s the stadium where the game will be held. • We went to Pilates together last Saturday, that was fun! • We went scuba diving last summer, which/that I’ve always wanted to try. • That man who/- holds the world record for weightlifting. • The main events were horse riding and dog racing, none of which/that I like. • Friday is the day -/what our friends take a stroll in the countryside. • I made loads of new mates in the club, most of whom/of who live locally. • He should find a gym buddy; someone who/whom can motivate him to work out harder. • Joan did the paragliding course, which/what was really expensive. • Lots of people came to hang out at the food festival, some of whom/of which I knew.