HSK 5 检验书写练习： H51002 中文版 1.王小明终于要搬进去宿舍，带着又开心又想念家乡的情绪。小明认为自己是成人了，因此不允许父母情帮助他。父母情不理解他们唯一小孩的感想，为什么孩子拒绝了他们的帮忙？小明的父母情只希望为小明祝福，希望宿舍环境好而且舍友也对他好。 笔记：我当时不坏“坦率”这个词，所以忽略它。你会如何把它插入进去小文章？ 2. 这位女人正在跟他的男朋友聊天。

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HSK 5 检验书写练习： H51002 中文版 1.王小明终于要搬进去宿舍，带着又开心又想念家乡的情绪。小明认为自己是成人了，因此不允许父母情帮助他。父母情不理解他们唯一小孩的感想，为什么孩子拒绝了他们的帮忙？小明的父母情只希望为小明祝福，希望宿舍环境好而且舍友也对他好。笔记：我当时不坏“坦率”这个词，所以忽略它。你会如何把它插入进去小文章？ 2. 这位女人正在跟他的男朋友聊天。她的表情多么有阳光，因为男女朋友在讨论假日的计划。这个队打算去德国为了庆祝谈恋爱三年。谁不知(好像，应该写谁知），男友也已经开始准备求婚的那一天。男友亲自选了德国当旅游的地点，因为两人在大学时期那时候认识的。笔记：最后，妳可不可以给我评价一下！个个题目一共10分会算多少？先谢了。英文版（我的母语） 1.WangXiaoMing is finally moving to college and is excited yet homesick. XiaoMing thinks of himself as an adult, and does not want his parents to help him move. His parents don't understand why there only child refuses to accept their help? XiaoMing's parents just want the best for him, and hope that dormitory environment is good and that his roommate treats him well. 2. This lady is currently talking to her boyfriend. Happiness is written all over her face, because she and her boyfriend are currently discussing travel plans. This couple's plans are to go to Germany to celebrate their 3 year anniversary. Little did she know， her boy friend already prepared to propose during the trip. Her boyfriend chose Germany, because that is where they met in college. Can you rate both of my paragraphs out of 10?Thanks in advance

29 сент. 2015 г., 16:05

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HSK 5 检验书写练习： H51002

中文版
1.王小明终于要搬进去宿舍，带着又开心又想念家乡的情绪。小明认为自己是成人了，因此不允许父母情（亲）帮助他。父母情不理解他们唯一小孩的感想，为什么孩子拒绝了他们的帮忙？小明的父母情只希望为小明祝福，希望宿舍环境好而且舍友也对他好。

虽然会想家，但王小明最终还是要搬到大学里去，对此他很兴奋。小明觉得自己是大人了，不想他父母帮他搬。他父母不明白为什么自己唯一的孩子不让他们帮忙。小明父母希望小明一切都好，希望宿舍的环境不错和室友也对小明不错。

笔记：我当时不坏“坦率”这个词，所以忽略它。你会如何把它插入进去小文章？

Which word means “坦率” in English?

2. 这位女人正在跟他的男朋友聊天。她的表情多么有阳光，因为男女朋友在讨论假日的计划。这个队一对打算去德国为了庆祝谈恋爱三年。谁不知(好像，应该写谁知），男友也已经开始准备求婚的那一天。男友亲自选了德国当旅游的地点，因为两人在大学时期那时候认识的。

这位女子正在和好男友聊天，幸福全写在了她脸上，因为她和男友正计划旅行。这一对打算去德庆祝他们的三周年纪念。但她一点都不知道，她男友已经准备在旅行中向她求婚。她男友选择去德国旅行是因为大学时他们就是在那里认识的。

I's not polite if you call a lady 女人.

ps: Can you help me to modify my articles, thanks?

http://www.italki.com/entry/610376

http://www.italki.com/entry/610378

笔记：最后，妳可不可以给我评价一下！个个题目一共10分会算多少？先谢了。

7分，I can understand most of the meaning if I don't read the English version.

英文版（我的母语）
1.WangXiaoMing is finally moving to college and is excited yet homesick. XiaoMing thinks of himself as an adult, and does not want his parents to help him move. His parents don't understand why there only child refuses to accept their help? XiaoMing's parents just want the best for him, and hope that dormitory environment is good and that his roommate treats him well.

2. This lady is currently talking to her boyfriend. Happiness is written all over her face, because she and her boyfriend are currently discussing travel plans. This couple's plans are to go to Germany to celebrate their 3 year anniversary. Little did she know， her boy friend already prepared to propose during the trip. Her boyfriend chose Germany, because that is where they met in college.

Can you rate both of my paragraphs out of 10?Thanks in advance

1 октября 2015 г.