Help correct my short story translation Hello everyone! I'm a new iTalki user learning Chinese. I have translated a children's short story from a book "365 Bed Time Stories", but would like some feedback on my translations. I don't think my translation skills are very good yet! The original story can be seen here: https://www.dropbox.com/s/8kj4ri91rs7h7gi/Story.jpg?dl=1 My translation is as follows; Title: New Year Baby Original Work by Bāo Lěi Pictures by Zhāng Chē 1: Obviously, it is very good to be gazing out the window 2: New Year Baby riding the red carp has come 3: Happy New Year! 4: Carp spits out of his mouth a New Year's Present 5: New Year Baby has flown away 6: Obviously, it is very good to fly out the window 7: They are riding a white cloud to chase after New Year Baby 8: They are at the white cloud and have fallen asleep 9: They woke up to find they were in bed 10: They under their pillow then discovered a wrapped present 11: It turns out, the present was the first part of "365 Bed Time Stories"Hi everyone! I'm so sorry - I didn't realise that link wouldn't work for friends in China. I couldn't see how to add a picture directly to my post. Please try this link instead: http://clsnoswell.com/6d298949-12d5-435d-a41f-00e3024b1eeb/Story.jpg Thank you!