Jessie💞Isabella
An old friend recommended a cardio workouts live streaming on Douyin, a Chinese version of Tiktok. I was afraid to get addicted to those funny videos on the platform, so I didn’t download the App. Instead, I watched and followed the recording on another platform. It helped me exercise different parts of my body, smoothed out the tense knots, and felt refreshed. My friend said I would see the effects in a week if I keep it up.
2022年6月7日 14:24
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An old friend recommended a cardio workout live streaming on Douyin, a Chinese version of Tiktok. I was afraid to get addicted to those funny videos on the platform, so I didn’t download the App. Instead, I watched and followed the recording on another platform. It helped me exercise different parts of my body, smooth out the tense knots, and feel refreshed. My friend said I would see the effects in a week if I keep it up.
Well written. Just remember to put infinitives after "It helped me".
2022年6月8日
An old friend recommended a cardio workout live streaming on Douyin, the Chinese
version of Tiktok. I was afraid of getting addicted to those funny videos on the
platform, so I didn’t download the App. Instead, I watched and followed the
recording on another platform. It helped me exercise different parts of my body,
smooth out tense knots, and make me feel refreshed. My friend said I would see the
effects(or benefits) in a week if I kept it up.
There are a couple of places where you need to keep the tenses matched. Correct by GuideDogSaint. I really appreciate his help.
2022年6月8日
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