Veronika Šlõkova
I respect Japan as country, but fall in love with their food: sushi, rice with egg, various sauces, sweets and soups. A lot of Japanese food are healthy and if you eat these, you will lose weight.
2021年9月29日 20:27
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I respect Japan as country, but fall in love with their food: sushi, rice with egg, various sauces, sweets and soups. A lot of Japanese food are healthy and if you eat these, you will lose weight.
You could say I Love Japan, I fell Inlove with their food especially the sushi, rice, egg and various sweets and soups. Japanese food is really healthy and if you eat these, you will lose weight.
2021年9月29日
I respect Japan as country, and fall in love with their food: sushi, rice with eggs, various sauces, sweets and soups. A lot of Japanese food is healthy and, if you eat these, you will lose weight.
Respecting a country and loving their food are not antithetical! I made just a couple corrections, your text is overall quite good :) if you'd like to improve your English even further, feel free to send me a message so we can have a chat!
2021年9月29日
I respect Japan as country, but fall in love with their food: sushi, rice with egg, various sauces, sweets and soups. A lot of Japanese food are healthy and if you eat these, you will lose weight.
I respect Japan as a country, but i fall in love with their food: sushi, and rice with egg, and the various sauces, and sweets and soyps. A lot of japanes food are healthy and if you eat thses, you xill lose weight.
2021年9月29日
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