I read an article entitled “How to raise an healthy child”. The article suggest to plan the pregnancy in advance, around 25 and 32 years old. Two years are often needed to start a pregnancy and many couples have less chances due to infertility problems. The article says that after 35 years old the possibility to get pregnant decrease 10% a year and at that age the child should be already delivered. Women mustn’t have a baby at 40. This makes me feel nervous as l don’t want a baby now. The article also told that a mom shouldn’t be under-wealth because the baby can born as a premature or under-wealth baby. To be under wealth can decries possibility to get pregnant as well.
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I've read an article entitled “How to raise a healthy child”. The article suggests to plan the pregnancy in advance and claims that a woman should try to have a child between 25 and 32 years old. Two years are often needed to start a pregnancy and many couples have fewer chances to start a family due to infertility problems. The article says that the likelihood for a woman to have a child after 35 years old decreases by 10% each year and thus that women should have had their first child before. Moreover, women mustn’t have a baby at 40. This makes me feel nervous as l don’t want to have a baby for now. The article also told that a mom shouldn’t be underweighted because she runs the risk of giving birth to a premature or underweighted baby. Being underweighted for a woman can also reduce her chances to get pregnant as well.
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I read an article entitled, “How to Raise a Healthy Child”. [In the title of an article, we typically capitalize the first letter of all the head words. I did this for example. In a real case, you should use exactly the title the author gave the article.] The article suggests planning the pregnancy in advance, around 25 to 32 years old. Two years are often needed to start a pregnancy, and many couples (have a lesser chance/are less likely) to get pregnant due to infertility problems. The article says that after 35 years of age, the possibility of getting pregnant decreases by 10% a year, and at that age the child should be already delivered. [<-- In the last clause of this sentence, I think you mean that the entire pregnancy, plus final delivery, should ideally be completed prior to age 35. Is that correct? The meaning was not 100% clear to me.] Women mustn’t have a baby at 40. This makes me feel nervous as l don’t want a baby now. The article also says that a mom shouldn’t be underweight [Do you mean underweight? I think you must mean that.] because the baby can be born prematurely or the baby may be underweight. Being underweight can decrease the possibility of getting pregnant as well.
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