Zhenn
Could you help me check my paragraph I my hindsight, i recall she was a good girl who always help me a lot. She maybe is not a beautiful in appearance but a decent person. We had a lot of unforgetable momories.

I know everyone will change, that is life priciple but until now i can not accept her change.

She becomes another person who is stranger with me. And i fell a little disappointed in her.!

2019年4月4日 16:37
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You should post it as notebook entry to get corrections: https://www.italki.com/notebooks.

Some tips:

- capitalise the word "I": <em>I recall</em>

- check the spelling, e.g: <em>unforgettable memories</em>; <em>felt disappointed</em>

- use past tense when needed: <em>helped</em>

2019年4月4日
Thank you for your comment.
2019年4月5日