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Being comfortable in your own skin, though sometimes incredibly hard, is no doubt an absolute happiness.
I'm hoping that you will shine a light on your precious life.
2023年6月10日 14:48
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Being comfortable in your own skin, though sometimes incredibly hard, is no doubt an absolute happiness.
I'm hoping that you will shine a light on your precious life.
This is grammatically correct, as I would expect from someone with such a high English level!
It's more common to say "an absolute joy" or "absolute happiness" than "an absolute happiness" - it's not wrong, just a bit surprising 😊
Similarly, "shine a light on" is a somewhat surprising phrase to use here, since I usually think of it as "reveal", and I think you're trying to say something more like "focus on"?
Either way, there's no real problems. If I heard a model say this in a soap commercial, I would accept it without thinking twice 😄
2023年6月11日
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Being comfortable in your own skin, though sometimes incredibly hard, is no
doubt pure happiness. I'm hoping that you will shine a light on your
precious life.
詩的な話し方使っていいね
2023年6月11日
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Being comfortable in your own skin, though sometimes incredibly hard, is no doubt a source of absolute happiness.
I'm hoping that a light will shine on your precious life.
2023年6月11日
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