My Hometown - Surabaya

Today, I would like to write a note about my hometown. I was born and have grown up in Surabaya which is located in East Java, Indonesia. Surabaya is the second largest city in Indonesia after Jakarta. Surabaya is the capital city of the province of East Java. And Surabaya is the center for  government, commerce and industry of Eastern Indonesia.

Surabaya offers many delicious foods and nice places. Some kind of Surabaya's delicious foods are Rujak Cingur, Semanggi and Lontong Balap. While some nice places to visit in Surabaya are Tugu Pahlawan, Jembatan Merah, Monkasel dan Monumen Sura Baya.

Don't hestitate to come to Surabaya!

Nicely written. Subraya must be interesting to see.

My Hometown

Today, I want to write a note about my hometown. I was born and grew up in Surabaya, East Java, Indonesia. Surabaya is the second biggest city in Indonesia, after Jakarta. Surabaya is capital city of East Java.  Surabaya is also the center of government, commerce and industry of Eastern Indonesian.

Surabaya has many delicious foods and nice places. Some kinds of Surabaya's delicious foods are Rujak Cingur, Semanggi and Lontong Balap. While Some nice places in Surabaya are Tugu Pahlawan, Jembatan Merah, Monkasel dan Monumen Sura Baya.

Don't hestitate to come to Surabaya.

[Good work.  It sounds great.  I like Thai food here in the U.S., though I'm sure it's quite different from actual Thai food.]