Heidi
Is this ok? My dad is tall and strong with short black hair. Thanks
2024年8月29日 07:19
回答 · 4
Yes, that's correct! The sentence is clear and natural.
2024年8月29日
For me, the use of the preposition "with" results in a bit of an awkward sentence structure. We use "with" to talk about connections between people and things. I know that there are a variety of uses for "with," so ease up. "My dad is tall and strong with short, black hair." 🤔 So . . . without short black hair, would he not be tall and strong? My dad is tall and strong, and he has short, black hair. That's how I would write it. Again, it's personal preference for me. The original sentence will work. If so, I agree that a comma should be placed after "strong."
2024年8月29日
I would put a comma after "strong"
2024年8月29日
Yes
2024年8月29日
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