Hello !!
I want someone help me and give me his/her openion in these summary about me if there's any mistakes
"I am 4th year pharmacy student at Cairo university ,I am seeking for internships and scholarship in pharmaceutical industry field, specially R&D , quality control and pharmacovigilance.
I am motivatable ,confident and ambitious .
I have participated as a member and supervisor in student activities for 2 years,
I have got internships in pharmaceutical companies,I have gained communication, leadership and team work skills.
(You get what you focus on) ,so I am eager to continue my journey in my field with success"

Question

Hello !!
I want someone help me and give me his/her openion in these summary about me if there's any mistakes 
"I am 4th year pharmacy student at Cairo university ,I am seeking for internships and scholarship in pharmaceutical industry field, specially R&D , quality control and pharmacovigilance.
I am motivatable ,confident and ambitious .
I have participated as a member and supervisor in student activities for 2 years, 
I have got internships in pharmaceutical companies,I have gained communication, leadership and team work skills.
(You get what you focus on) ,so I am eager to continue my journey in my field with success"

Answer

"I am a 4th year pharmacy student at Cairo university and am seeking internships and scholarships in the pharmaceutical industry field, especially R&D, quality control and pharmacopeia-vigilance.
I am motivated, confident and ambitious.
I have participated as a member and supervisor in student activities for 2 years, 
I have gotten internships in pharmaceutical companies and have gained communication, leadership and team working skills.
I am eager to continue my journey in my field with success"

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