May I write this ?
As the increasing competition between schools,and more and more people started paying attention to us ,we fell under mounting pressure.So it is important to find ways to eliminate stress from our life.

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I think it might be clearer if you said this: 
Due to the increasing competition between schools, more and more people started paying attention to us and we fell under mounting pressure. So now it is important to find ways to eliminate stress from our lives.

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