Calla Lily
A factory which pollutes air should be fined/punished heavily
Hi there, could you please review this to see if it makes sense?
1. I mostly agree it's more important to be happy in my job than earning a large salary.
2. It's easy to be addicted to the Internet for children.
3. A factory which pollutes air should be fined/punished heavily.
Thank you so much for your help!
2017年2月8日 13:48
回答 · 2
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1. I mostly agree it's more important to be happy in my job than earning a large salary.
<OK, but I would use a comma between "my job, than earning a large salary">
2. It's easy to be addicted to the Internet for children.
3. A factory which pollutes air should be fined/punished heavily.
2017年2月8日
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