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An exercise Article for B2 Cambridge exam Could you please correct this article that I wrote to practice for my B2 future exam? Trip’s idea We are living in a strange period, our life are changed by the coronavirus lockdown. In the other way, the lockdown have rappresented an important opportunity to reflect about our lifestyle routine. Before lockdown people were busy about work, study, it was difficult to find the time to think about in which direction their life were going. One of the most negative effect of social distancing is the impossibility to stay in open space in contact with the nature. How many times have we renounced to make a walk because we were too busy or too tired about our lifestyle routine? In my opinion it succeded many times, but now people have understood the importance of small things like a walk in a beautiful park. The power of nature is the immediate positive effect that it have in our mind and body. So, one interesting idea to spent a day in total relax is to visit Valle del Lambro Regional park in Italy. The Valle del Lambro Regional Park is a protected natural area of Lombardy established in 1983. It is managed by a consortium of 36 municipalities in the provinces of Como, Lecco and Monza and Brianza. The park includes a territory which estends from north to south for 25 km in which there are two important lakes: Lake of Alserio and Lake of Pusiano. In this park is possibile to see a different kind of plant life and fauna. It is a good opportunity for parents to bring their children to spend a different day. Children could see many animals, at the same time their family could sensitize them to the respect of nature. Being in nature allows us to nourish and manifest what we are and respect what we are allows us to respect what surrounds us.
2020年6月4日
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Email English Test Hi, could you correct me this writing exercise? Thanks. Dear Mr. O’Neil, I would explain to you my personal situation, I’m sure that you could understand it. As you known, I have had a car accident two months ago and after that I was operated to my shoulder. The doctor told me that I would be better after a few months but now nothing seems to be better. So, I would told you the permission to take a day off from work. I have the necessity to do a medical visit and it will probably the next Wednesday. Therefore, I thought that we could anticipated the meeting with the staff on this Wednesday on 9. 30 a.m. then the video conference at the 2 p.m. Also, I was thinking if were good for you that we could participated the phone call to a customer in Turkey on next Monday. What do you think about it? I hope you could understand my serious healty situation. I attend your response. Best Regards
2020年5月15日
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Email (B2 exam) Hi everyone! please let me know if you see any grammar errors or incorrect form of writing. Hi Lena, Thanks for your invitation. I’m very happy we can meet next weekend. I was thinking that we can going out to dinner and eat Japanase food. I have heard there are many sushi’s reastaurants in your neighbourhood, isn’t true? In general like eat various type of cooking, it could be a good way to experiment new taste of different parts of the world. Sushi is definitely my favourite kind of food. I usually eat sushi once a week. Other than that, I like very much eat persian food. I’m appasionate about oriental culture. I was wondering that you could choose between sushi or persian food for our dinner. Let me know! Afterwards I would like to go into a cocktail bar that’s not too noisy where we could talk to each other about our stuff undisturbed. Meanwhile, how are things? How is going your yoga class? It’s kind of you to invite me to stay with you next weekend. See you soon! Giulia
2020年4月28日
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Informal Letter (B2 exam) Hi! Could you correct this exercise? Thanks :) Dear Marisa, Many thanks for your message, I’m glad to hear from you again. The first thing I want to say is how friendship is so important in my life. Since when I was a child I’ve always played into the pubblic garden near my home. Here I’ve had the opportunity to knew many children like me and I grew up with our companies. Many of them are still my friends. I think that friendship is an important aspect of our life because if there were the necessity we could help each other in diffucult times other than we could share good times togheter. I’ve a little crew and I considered all of them my best friends. We know each other for more than ten years. We have all different personalities but in my opinion this charatheristic is own strenght. I moved to Firenze four months ago and so, It’s more difficult to see each other, but we always tell each other everything. We are going to booking our holiday in Turkey for the next summer. Please tell me about your friends in the next letter. Write soon! Best wishes, Giulia
2020年4月26日
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该内容违反了我们的《社区行为准则》。2020年4月15日
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Revision of this story, Pls. "The Sign of Four" is one of the story based on Sherlock holmes figure. Sherlock Holmes was the most famous detective in london and for him his work was a very important thing in his life. At the first the story told about Watson who was Sherlock’s friend and also an important helper with his cases. In the past Watson worked as a doctor in the British army then in a mission he was near to died and so he decided to retire hilmself and came back to England. It was a boring day when a woman went to the Holmes’s house to speak with him. Miss Morston missed her father many years ago but recently she received a letter with the invite to come in the teatre without the police, here she'll meet che writer of a letter. So she wanted the help of Sherlock and Watson to discover where was her father and also she wanted to know why she received even year a pearl from misterious man. was there a connection from these two thing? Therefore they went to the appointment at the teatre and after that they followed the man who brought them to the Thaddeus Sholto’s house. Thaddeus Sholto’s father was a friend of Miss Morston’s father. Thaddeus told that the Miss Morston father died after an terrible argument with his father, the argument was about the discover of the Agra Treasure that they have had togheter some years ago.
2020年4月8日
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Netflix tv serie
Hi!
Could you tell me some British TV series to improve my listening?
For me it is simple reading book or newspapers but I've many difficulties with listening activities, for this reason I would like to make my listening skills better. Thank you!
2020年3月31日
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Netflix Hi! Could you tell me some British TV series to improve my listening? For me it is simple reading book or newspapers but I've many difficulties with listening activities, for this reason I would like to make my listening skills better. Thank you!
2020年3月31日
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Looking for a speaking patner
Hello everyone!
These are strange days..
In many countries of the world we are in lockdown at home, we are trying to protect ourselves from the coronavirus.
Our lifes are changed suddenly.
How are you living these days?
I'm trying to improve my skills in general and also I'm searching an english patner.

2020年3月30日
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A little story... It was a warm Sunday of August, the sun almost began to rise high in the sky. Mr.Pack and his son Paul went to the lake to fish,that day they would have been in family reunion to celebrate the engagement of the eldest daughter Louise. The two men had STARTED to fish from little time,when Mr. Pack saw in the lake a shape,a corpse that lay there. Some minutes before discerning the corpse,they had seen a man crawling through the plants near the shore of the lake. Father and son hid quickly themselves and then saw a man dressed in black who fled into the plants. The man dressed in black fell into the ground and tried to advance in the obscurity. Mr.Pack and Paul saw a second man (or a woman,they didn't know that) who was dressed in red and he was shooting the man dressed in black. The latter dragged the man dressed in black into the car. Mr. Pack and his son were very scared,to solve the situation they called the police and they told what was happened. They had just found a corpse and it had spread the blood creating a huge red spot in the middle of the lake. Maybe they might have found the murderer. It was very possible,but who was the second man? Father and son were the only witnesses,consequently they managed to read the register. The police after many days of research found out where the car was abbandoned. The car contained the body of the man in red. The man in black was buried in the ground and someone had dug his pit. man in black into the car that was parcked near the lake. After several analysis from the scientific police only one of the two men found was responsible for the crime:he was a man dressed in black. Why the man in red was in the car? who has buried the other? Maybe was there a third man?
2015年3月24日
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