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    Task1forIELTS/can you please give me a mark in your correction? It's very important to me. Than you! The pie charts illustrate how much water used in countries as North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia for three main reasons ( Industrial Agriculture and Domestic use). In Central Asia there was the usage for agricultural with 88%, while in Europe use only one third of the pie chart for the same purpose. However, there were three countries Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia with highly usage of water for agricultural purpose with 84%, 88% and 81%. The most domestic use of the water was in South America which was 19%, while only 7% water used for domestic usage in both Central Asia and South East Asia. In Europe almost half usage of the water was for industry. In contrast, in Central Asia people only used 5% of the water for the same reason. The second country where highly used water for industrial purpose was North America (48%).
    2017年7月7日
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    IELTS writing topic Subject: International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages My answer: By traveling to the other countries we find so many interesting things for ourselves. Actually, when people visit other countries, they are familiar with new cultures and find new international friends. Moreover, for the countries which will be visited by travelers, it’s good for their economy. In this essay, I’m going tell more details about all advantages of traveling. First of all and which is more important, people will see new cultures. In the other word, they self-developing their self by visiting new countries. In addition, they are going to find new friends. I think new friends give us new opportunities developing ourselves. For example, by talking with new people we can find something new for ourselves. Also, we can improve our English or other languages which are really important for being the successful person. Actually, by learning new languages we train our brain and improve our logical skills. The second, by visiting new countries we increase the economy of the countries. When people travel to the other countries, they bring money to the place where they are going to visit. Actually, it’s a good chance when countries have so many travelers “ more visitor, more money”. Therefore, those countries will reach a good economy. But of course, the economy of the countries not only depends on the number of visitors. However, they could be a good possibility for each country. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize advantages of traveling is more than disadvantages. All reasons which were mentioned are great positive events that could happen. However, we should keep in mind that everything depends on us. I mean, we can find some nice friends or meet with new culture only on that time when we really want that. So, the more important thing is we should know what exactly we want and go through the goal.
    2017年1月27日
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    TOEFL independent writing Question: Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. My answer: New technologies play a big role in today’s modern society. If I had a possibility create a new holiday, I would definitely choose the day when Apple’s company was launched by Steve Jobs. Actually, there are several reasons that I think so, but in this essay I’m going through two reasons which are the most important. First and foremost, this company is pretty famous and so popular. Apple produce so many products such as iPhone, Laptop, Apple watch etc. Moreover, all of them are useful and make our life easier. For instance, iPhone has possibility count our heart rate, steps per day, calories etc. which are control our health. In other words, this product like others is necessary and I believe that all people need not only iPhones, but also other products. As a result, we should remember the day when Apple’s company was launched by Steve Jobs and celebrate this. Also, I want to celebrate this day offer all people go outside at the night and turn off all lamps outside and even car’s lamps. Then turn on the flashlight of their iPhones. Essentially, it would be so romantic and very nice. Moreover, Steve Jobs was an intelligence and nice person. Thus, think about him is our responsibility and just be thankful him. He was the first person who produce the sensor cell phone. Also, he was a hardworking person and it is a good example for our children. So by remembering of him we show them which kind of person was Steve Jobs and what did he do. For example, our children don’t know how and by whom Apple’s products were made, so we should talk about Him with them. Even though some of them know about Jobs, maybe a few of them don’t know about his biology. So by celebrating the first day when company was made we can remind our children about his life. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize Steve Jobs was the person who helps us live pretty easy. Moreover, by using his products we have a chance keep our health in control. Therefore, remember of him and keep in mind why he became famous is our responsibility. So celebrate the day when this company was begun is really a nice idea. Let’s do it!
    2016年10月12日
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    TOEFL independent writing Question: If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. My answer: I admire Steve Jobs and he is one of the famous inventor in the world. So if I had a chance meet a famous person from history, I would definitely say that want to visit Steve Jobs. This is true for so many reasons but in this essay I will discuss about two of them. First and foremost, he was an intelligence person and hardworking. Unfortunately, he is not between us but so many people remember him when they use his products. Nowadays, Apple is one of the most popular brand in the world. It is famous not only because of the name of the brand, but also because interface, Siri, iCloud, touch ID and any other applications which make it easier to work with. Moreover, in my opinion there is no any other brand that care about user’s safe. Whereas, Apple is developing all time and its’ security get better like touch ID and Apple ID. For instance, most of my family use Apple products and just enjoy about that, because it’s easy to use and comfortable. Therefore, if I had possibility visit only one person from the past, it would be Steve Jobs because he really intelligence and I’m sure I can teach from him so many things. For example, how to make a startup, ask several advices how to reach our aim etc. Another reason is because he is very nice and kind person. I know this because I have read his biology. Moreover, he is a vegetarian and took care about animal. Be honest, after reading his biology and learn more about his life, I decided to be vegetarian too, and now I am vegetarian for 3 years. Actually, I appreciate people who are vegetarian and really admire them, and Jobs is one of them. Besides that, even though he had hard period in life, he never gave up and reached hid goal. Thus, if I had had a chance, I would have visited him and just take a photo with him. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that Steve Jobs is one of the favorite person who I admire. As I mentioned he had several positive characteristics that I like such as intelligence, hardworking, very kind and also he was a vegetarian. Thus, he has been my life pattern and I want to be like him. I mean invite something that will be useful for people life and even though I will die, people remember me as an enthusiastic person.
    2016年10月10日
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    TOEFL independent writing (Watching television is bad for children.) Watching TV is a kind of addiction! Nowadays, the fact that children watching for so long TV is one of the most important issues for today’s modern society. It’s the subject of intense debate and this is a question that certainly does not have one correct answer. However, I’m of the point of view that children should not watching TV, because it’s really kind of addiction and also distract them from study. First and foremost, as we know addicting is really harmful for our life. For example, addicted to cigarette or alcohol harmful for our health, also addicting to watching TV leads to forget about anything and any jobs. If children start watching some cartoons, it will be impossible take away them from TV. Besides that, there are several cartoons that have a bad affect on them such as bad attitude. But even though there are different kind of educational TV show, children prefer watching cartoons, so it make a big problem. What I’m trying to say is watching TV could be positive too, but children don’t want to watch such TV shows where teach them. Actually, they want to be free from studying at home and just relax and have fun. Moreover, watching TV distracting children from studying. Actually they just dragging their feet and say I will study later, but this “later” comes so late and they spend so long in front of TV. Of course, I believe that they would like to rest of studying, but I would recommend them to do some sport or playing games. By doing sport our brain gets fresh and our productivity grow up. Whereas, watching cartoon cannot teach us somethings new and useful. For example, if children watching their favorite cartoon, they will worry about hero of the cartoon and it would lead them to be sad if something happened with their favorite hero during the day, and sometimes it just won’t let them concentrate on their studying. My own experience is a good example here. I remember I was 7 years old and really liked watching cartoon. Actually, it had a bad affect on my studying and finally my mother didn’t let me watch cartoon for so long. Now I’m thankful my mom that she encourage me study and only with her helps I attend university and I study pretty good. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that watching TV cannot be bad all the time, we just should sometimes control our children and encourage them watching good TV shows which are more helpful and avoid them from cartoons which have a bad affect on them.
    2016年10月8日
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    TOEFL independent writing Question: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. My answer: By doing households tasks our children become more independent! I believe that children have to be required to do some stuff at home as soon as possible. Therefore, children become independent and also they should be appreciative their family. In this essay I’m going to go through both of reasons. By doing some stuff at home, we start prepare for our future life. What I’m trying to say is we will not always live with our parents. And one day we will get married and do the same things as we did in parent’s house. As a result, do households tasks is helpful for our children. My own experience is a good example for this situation. I remember when I was a child, I always help my mother such as cleaning the house, washing dishes, cook foods etc. Finally, I grow up and now I’m living alone. Therefore, I can do everything by myself at home without someone’s helps. Sometimes our parents ask do some stuff at home, not because they need help, but because, they want we become independent. Moreover, our family care about us every day and every moment. So in my opinion, helping them is our responsibility. We should help them as soon as possible and be appreciative. Actually, do some stuff at home is small thing that we can do for them. By helping them, we show our love and it’s very important in the family. For instance, if we compare two children, one who helps his or her parent’s at home and another who doesn’t, we will see they absolutely different. The one who helps his or her family’s, is respect them and ready to do everything for them, just to show his or her love. In contrast to the first ones, other is not seem to be thankful to his or her parents. Therefore, we have to help our parents and love them. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that helping our family is very important. As I said above, we could be independent and also show our love to them. We also should respect and take care of them! So, lets passionately help our family and be good children for them.
    2016年10月5日
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    TOEFL independent writing Question: It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay. My answer: Big city and new opportunity! I believe that living in a big city is much better than living in countryside for people. It’s true not only because of good opportunities, but also we can have a healthy life style. In this essay I’m going to go through both of reasons. By living in a big city we could have so many opportunities. First, there are too many different jobs related our field of study. So we have possibility choose what we want. Therefore, we become more self-developed. What I’m trying to say is hardworking and trying to be the best, helps us improve ourselves. My own experience is a good example. I have been living in Kiev since I was a child. Now, I’m studying at university for master’s degree, and my field of study is Artificial Intelligence. There are too many good jobs with perfect salary. But if I lived in countryside, I would not never have an opportunity study in such of field of study. Actually, there it’s a new subject and not developed in countryside. In addition, living in a big city has another benefit that lets people become independent. I mean by facing to our problems and try to solve, helps us grow up and become self-confident. As I said before, by living in megalopolises we will have a healthy life. There are well developed medicines and there are so many ambulances in big cities. Even though some people believe that living in countryside is perfect because of fresh air, in a big city people have more opportunity be healthy. And a good example of this is the gym! Everybody know sports and exercises good for our health. Moreover, in developed city there are new exercise equipment. Therefore, people have more opportunity take care of themselves and have a healthy life style. In conclusion, I just want to emphasize our life is become better if we live in big city. As I mentioned above we could find the job which we dreamed to get that and made our career. Moreover, we have a possibility be healthy by going to the gym and doing exercises. According to these reasons, what will you prefer for your children? Living in countryside or living in megalopolis.
    2016年10月5日
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    TOEFL independent writing Question: People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Agree or disagree? My answer: If we want to improve our knowledge and worldview, traveling to the foreign country just will help us. The issue stated by the topic is whether or not people get more benefit by travelling in their own country that foreign countries. This is a very important issue because only by travelling to the other countries we can improve our knowledge about culture and new customs from that country. However, I believe that travelling to the new countries is much beneficial than do that in own country. By visiting new counties, we can find new interesting things such as new customs, culture etc. As a result, it’s possible to improve our world view. Whereas, travelling to the others cities in our own country, we won’t find any new cultures or customs. For instance, I remember I was reading about culture in China several years ago, and when I was travelling to China last summer, I was in surprised. Actually, what I read and saw was completely different. So I decided if I want to know more about the country, I just should visit it. Therefore, we could say travelling to other country is much interesting than ours. Furthermore, when we travelling to the new country, we will learn their language, which is another benefit of travelling to foreign countries. In contrast to, our own country won’t teach us new languages. Even though there are too many classes for learning foreign language, they won’t be more effective than go to the country where they talk in that language. Therefore, it is a kind of activity for our brain. When it gets more practice, our productivity increase. Moreover, we can find new friends and talk with them, which is really nice. By communicate with other people, we can teach something new from each other and it’s really useful. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that travelling in new country is much better and interesting than our own countries. In this case we will learn so many new and our worldview increase. Whereas, we cannot reach these goals in our countries. Actually, culture, customs, language and etc. are the same in one country. So if you would like to open new things for yourself and learn something new, just travel to other country instead of yours and enjoy moments.
    2016年10月3日
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    TOEFL independent writing Question: Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. My answer: Family’s advice is much better than put our life endanger. There are two types of people who want to learn the new things like ask advice from their family, or those who prefer do everything by their self. Actually, both of them are good. Families advice is good for those who are more communicable and trust their family, whereas others just don’t trust their family and prefer their own experience. However, both of them have advantages, but if I have to choose between them, I would definitely prefer family’s advices. Their advices are more useful and helpful than personal experience. Moreover, sometimes own experiences are bad for our health! If we don’t want to waste time, we should ask help from our relative because only they understand us and wish good for us. They will not advice something bad that be harmful for us. Also, some experiences are danger for us health and I believe we should do them. We should just trust our relative and talk to them as possible it is. Even though some people know how parent’s advices are important, they would prefer own experience, but they will realize personal experience is not a good option only when they already did that. Moreover, sometimes own experience let people to remember their mistakes and never repeat them anymore. Actually, they feel it by every inches of their body. Also, own experiences help people to be more confident and independent. As I know, some people just so proud ask something from someone. For example, my friend so shy to ask help from her parents. Or I used to talk with some girl who thought her family don’t understand her at all and they don’t love her. Thus, she thought personal experience is more preferable. In conclusion, I would emphasize we shouldn’t be so proud of ourselves or shy to ask help from our families or relative. Because there is no one who be closer than them to us and only they will understand us. Personally I always ask help from my brother and his wife. They love me and never want to something bad happen to me, and I’m happy have such a family. Thus, lets share our own experience and advices and never repeat others mistakes.
    2016年10月1日
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    TOEFL independent writing Question: Students at university often have a choice of place to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or apartment in the community. Compare the advantages of living in university housing with the advantages living in an apartment. Where would you prefer to live? Gives reasons for your preference. My answer: Sometimes hard period of time helps us be independent. As a result, livening in university dormitories better than living in apartment. If I had to choose between living in universities campus and an apartment, I would definitely choose dormitories. I think this, because advantages of that are more than apartment. First advantage of living in universities housing it’s next to the classes. So it’s a good argument as students always are late for the first classes. They shouldn’t go to university from other side of the city. Besides that, the atmosphere is really perfect for studying. When students look at others, they would like to study either and it’s really nice when a small group studying together. Actually, it’s called “environment influence “. Moreover, in this case students are near their professors and teachers. They can keep in touch with them and get answers to the questions as soon as possible. For example, I used to live in university campus, and I could keep in touch with my professor. And also I liked to go the library, because only there I could concentrate on my study. Even though students know about these advantages of living in campus, some of them prefer comfort. So they would like to live in apartment. Actually, it’s understandable, because in these ages people would like to live alone and be independent from their parents. They want to do what they want to and when. Also, when person live alone in an accommodation, it helps him or her be more confident and will do everything by himself or herself. For instance, my friend lives in a penthouse alone and she really likes it. Moreover, she does everything by herself such as, paying bills, buying foods, cleaning etc., and these make her stronger and in-dependent. Considering everything mentioned above, I want to emphasize that since we are students, it would be better if living in the university dormitories. University is the place for studying and students in this period should concentrate on their studying and campus will help them. Personally me prefer living in university dormitories.
    2016年9月28日
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