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Hi, if someone wants to help me about my question.... I thank you.
I don´t know if it is the correct form to write (1), if you want, you can correct me please.
Before to responding the answer, you should consider your mood today in this day..
What do you consider that is the most important thing in your life currently?money?, love?, friends?, family?, other, which?
If you had to decide today, which of these would you'd select (2), why?(1) What you mean is, "I don't know if it is grammatically correct".
(2) "Select" is okay but "choose" would be more natural.
0 hanno votato6 febbraio 20160How is your friday's nights? (1)
Time goes fast by quickly. When I was a student a few years ago, I used to spend my friday's nights going to a club with my friends and dancing all night and why not perhaps making new friends. No matter how the week have had gone, at the end of the week I just wanted to dress nice, to put on heels, and to do something fun. I never felt too tired to go out. I always had energy to hang out with my friends. But nothing is lasts forever, I guess everything changes at some point. Nowadays, when the word friday comes to my mind all I can think is about is my bed, popcorns, and netflix. Instead of attending a big party or going to a club, now I just prefer to have relaxing friday's nights at home. There's nothing better than laying down in my bed while picking a nice (2) movie on Netflix, or why not perhaps writing a notebook entry on Italki, lol.
I wonder how my friday's nights will change after 5 more years.(1) Change to either "How are your friday nights?" or "How is your friday night?"
(2) nice is just fine grammatically but "good" sounds more natural
Nice job! Your English is really good!
0 hanno votato6 febbraio 20161- Mi estudia fuera en Salamanca Hace casi dos años, estudié fuera en Salamanca de España. Fue una de las experiencias mejores de mi vida. Fui a Salamanca para estudiar la lengua española. Un grupo de mi universidad y yo vivimos en Salamanca con familias durante dos meses. También, estudiamos en colegio la historia, la cultura y el arte española. Sin embargo, mi parte favorita del viaje era la belleza de la ciudad y toda de su historia. Se construyeron los edificios con piedra llamada villamayor. Es piedra amarilla y por eso, brilla como oro por la noche porque se ilumina la exterior de casi cada edificio con luces. Ademas, me gusta mucho la catedral y la plaza mayor de la ciudad. Lo más divertido de todo el viaje fue el Mundial. Había muchas personas por las calles y restaurantes y toda la ciudad se ponía emocionante por los partidos. Nunca olvidaré mi experiencia en Salamanca.6 febbraio 201650
- El dia de hoy ¡Que buen dia hoy! ¡Hoy, he obtenido un puesto de trabajo de ayudante de investigación biomédico! Me gradué de universidad hace dos meses y durante ese tiempo, he intentado obtener un puesto en mi campo de estudio. Todavía, quiero llegar a ser medico pero por ahora, estoy entusiasmado por mi puesto nuevo. También, pienso que los comités de aceptación consideran favorable mi puesto. ¡Gracias por las correcciones!2 febbraio 201630
# The medicine progress The progress of medicine
In the twentieth century, science has succeeded produced (1) great results for medicine. Researchers in genetics has have got to cured more diseases that before were unthinkable (2). People with serious diseases have confidence that advances will be able help them.
Furthermore, there are a couples that they can not have a son because of fertility problems. However, today thankful due to in vitro fertilization fecundation they can have a family.
Also, the progress of genetics progress allows parents to choose how their son will be their son, because they be able choose the genetics genes of their son.
Apparently this is a great advance, but this also suppose causes (3) moral problems. There are is people that disagree with the use of these this methods.
In my opinion, it is necessary to regulate these advances so all people will win have (4) wellness.(1) this verb translation is difficult. You could use multiple translations. Another might be "...science has succeeded in producing great results for medicine."
(2) Another translation, if you want to include a comparison "more" would be "Researchers in genetics have cured more disease than what was previously thought possible."
(3) This is another difficult verb translation. You could also use "produces".
(4) One more difficult verb translation. You could also say "...so all people can be well."
Great job!
0 hanno votato30 gennaio 20161Discrimation at work
Discrimation at work
Equality between genders is an important, achievable and laudable goal. We should all strive to eradicate prejudice and discrimination in all its forms, especial sexism. People should all work together to make sure that everyone has the same opportunities and rights as everyone else.
It must be explained that assignment of gender roles began with child-rearing in pre-industrial times. The mother of the child needed to be at home in order to breastfeed the child. The father, instead, did things outside the home. The introduction of farming created a stable food supply, and the father then was able to begin to amass wealth and property. The mother, meanwhile, was still in the home, and her work brought in no money. It is this income disparity that is the root of gender inequality issues. Though we are well past the day that this was our only option for dividing labour, old habits and old thinking die hard.
It should be highlighted that women do not make statistically significant (1) less than men when comparing apples to apples (e.g. amount of time at current position, strength of company, education and work history, etc.); however, they are often passed up for employment and promotions based on sexual discrimination. Who deserves the job should get the job and women can easily earn the position rather than needing it to be reserved for them. These days, women are starting to outperform men in many employment fields and hiring should be determined only by skills, certifications, or other such factors that are pertinent to the job in question.
So, in conclusion, some day it would be very nice to have gender equality, but meanwhile we should be moving, towards a stance of true equality, which means dealing with social and legal issues. All humans should be treated equal, regardless of age, race, gender, social status, religion, or ethnicity.(1) I believe this should be "statistically significantly". Significantly would be the adverb which modifies the verb "make". This is tough though because it sounds funny to have two adverbs in a row.
Otherwise, this is superb. ¡Espero hablar el español tan bien como hablas el ingles!
0 hanno votato30 gennaio 20161- el dia hoy Hoy vi un partido de baloncesto del sobrino de mi novia. Él tiene alrededor de diez años. Los partidos de los niños son muy graciosos porque ellos persiguen la pelota sobre todo el gimnasio. Después del partido, regresé a la casa para comer. Tengo tres perras en casa y ellas me parecen los niños que juegan el baloncesto. Siempre ellas tienen mucha energía. El resto del día, voy a estudiar y esperar a mi novia a sale tu trabajo está noche. También, por la buen tiempo hoy, es posible que pasee las perras. Espero que mi novia quiera ir al restaurante para cenar. ¡Gracias por las correcciones!30 gennaio 201650
I got woke up today very happy (or a little more natural, "I woke up very happy today").
The reason for my happiness that I am happy is that yesterday many people yesterday helped me solve answer the questions that I had the doubts about some themes subjects. (1)
(2) Also, I'm happy because it's Friday. When I wake up very happy, I listen to the music of my beautiful Colombia, in special especially Vallenato, but forever I also always listen to Silvestre Dangond. I like all his songs.
Have a very nice day :)(1) You could just say, "...answer the questions that I had." or if you wanted to be more specific, "...answer the questions that I had about _______." And you would say specifically what you questions were about.
(2) I think I corrected what you were trying to say in the , but if you were saying that you only listen to the music of Colombia because it is Friday, then you would say, "On Fridays, when I wake up very happy, I listen to the music of my beautiful Colombia...", but I think you were trying to say you were also happy because it is Friday.
Great job! These mistakes were all style and usage and not grammar errors!
0 hanno votato29 gennaio 20160
