Pixar (Part 3) As the owner of four length animation Oscar, Pixar never lacks commend from critics and audience. Some audience pre-assume it is an good film even without watching as long as there is a

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Pixar (Part 3) As the owner of four length animation Oscar, Pixar never lacks commend from critics and audience. Some audience pre-assume it is an good film even without watching as long as there is an adorable lamp at the beginning of the film. This good reputation brings a lot of audience into cinemas, which all studios want, but not many of them can achieve. ====================================== Part 1: http://www.italki.com/entry/483124 Part 2: http://www.italki.com/entry/484996

26 окт. 2014 г., 2:36

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Pixar (Part 3)

As the owner of four length animation Oscar,As the owner of four Oscar's for Animation, Pixar never lacks commend from critics and audience. Some members of the audience pre-assume it is an good film even without watching, as long as there is an adorable lamp at the beginning of the film. This good reputation brings a lot of audience people into cinemas, which all studios want, but not many of them can achieve.

COMMENTS: I just changed some things, but there is nothing wrong with your entry. I still understood everything you were trying to say. I think the only thing to mention is the distinction between 'people' and 'audience'. It just sounds better when you say 'brings a lot of people into cinemas' = sounds more casual.

great work.
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Part 1: http://www.italki.com/entry/483124
Part 2: http://www.italki.com/entry/484996

26 октября 2014 г.