Same! Im learning at university currently :(

my today's experience

Today's This afternoon, i watched a TV series in which my idol was the main actor. I just saw it for a while, because I thought that was embarrassed. My idol was not good at proforming, and did not know how to act. i just hoped he could focus on singing and dancing which were his talents.
I do not do the same thing unlike other idolaters. There are some drawbacks on my idol, and i can see it. Doesnt make sense

Hi, good try. You may need some more practice to make things clear. Keep going, you will get better over time :)

Queen´s Park Language School (Report)

Introduction
The aim of this report is to detail student satisfaction with the classes and facilities at the Queen´s Park Language School and to make suggestions for improving future study trips.
Accommodation
More students were satisfied with their accommodation with families, because they were able to practise their English with the members of the house. However, students who stayed in the halls of residence, could not to speak with natives out of their classes, considering that the majority of students were Spanish. We believe it would be preferable to have more available families in order to avoid the residence.
The school
In general, students thought the school and the classes were adequate and correct. Their main criticisms were about the lunch and the length of classes. As In regards to lunch, it is generally thought that only a sandwich is not enough. We know that we have to nourish our body at the same time that our and brain. Although it is true that people often do have not have time to eat something more elaborate. In terms of the duration of classes, we could have a break each every two hours to disconnect and speak with other students or even with the teacher.
Weekend activities
Trips to London and Oxford had were rated very highly. On the other hand, to Bath and Stratford were too boring. There are was not enough time for shopping and too much sightseeing. We propose that all the trips should have a balanced time for shopping and sightseeing.
Conclusion
Overall, the majority of students are satisfied with the experience about of the trip and the school. We hope that the suggested changes are implemented, to improve the quality of your service.

Hi, this is a very good attempt. There are some minor adjustments to be made to make the sentence flow better but the overall paragraph is good :)

Former Director of Tax Office acussed pressures to obstruct investigation in SQM case.

The former Director of Tax Office has revealed that he was victim of pressures pressuring with the purpose of obstructing the inquiry of the SQM case.

In a journalistic investigative TV program, the ex-Director said that people, supposedly in behalf of the former Minister of Interior, requested that all the accountability information had to be moved away from SQM by a big truck.

Last week it was revealed that the Internal Taxes Office decided does not continue with new complaints in this investigation related to illegal funding to politics. In the interview, the former Director pointed out that these people were really concerned about what there were inside SQM.

Very good paragraph with hardly any mistakes. The only mistake really is the use of the particle "The". If you are describing a physical object, like a room or a case you would use "the" or it may be interpreted that there is more than one of that particular object

4.24 Buying Clothes

I haven’t written on italki for a while, a long while, because ever since the new semester started, my schedule was getting busier and busier. I have five different courses to teach and almost all of them are alien to me, so I need to plan the lessons day after day, night after night. My weekends are also taken, usually with two full days’ work. The pay is good; otherwise I would not be willing to make such a sacrifice. Sometimes I wonder whether it is worth it, when I find I have been spread too thin to meet all the different needs. I still haven’t got the answer yet, but I try to be positive, especially now there are three paydays every month waiting in line.

I know money can’t buy all, but it is a great feeling that when I shop online, I could just put the items I prefer directly to the shopping cart and don’t even have to blink. The desire for possession is like a sort of addiction. You just can’t get enough of it.

I love to buy things; they give me a sense of satisfaction and security, and good lessons too. An illustration of this is, I have wasted quite a lot of money buying clothes that barely fit me both in size or style. They were mostly bought out of a sudden impulse, when they were shot so nicely on models, and when I overestimated my resemblance to those models. Yes, it was a total waste, and I used to regret that to no end. But again, now I try to look at the bright sight of it. It is only after buying so many good-for-nothing outfits that I finally realize what I really want and what I really need. So when I shop for clothes these days, I buy wisely and become more particular than ever. I would not consider good bargains as I used to, or strange designs. I would go straightly for something that offers comfort, quality material, and patterns that reflect better on my style, my personalities and my age. Just like in a relationship, to someone, it is only after so many setbacks that he or she could finally understand what is truly desired, what is best fitted. The process could be painful, but in the meanwhile, helpful too.

This is a near perfect paragraph. I think that some of the mistakes being made here are purely just because of not being a native speaker. The corrections just make the sentence flow better but again, there are no huge mistakes here and the paragraph could just be left untouched. Well done :)