Turá
#157 Could you help me correct the text ? 【mercari / メルカリ】 I’ll introduce you to a popular app which is called “mercari” for a flea market. Basically, one of sharing economy service is. As easy to use it and also it is possible to keep anonymity by posting, nowadays this is the biggest website in Japan.
2022年1月24日 09:08
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#157 Could you help me correct the text ? 【mercari / メルカリ】 I’ll introduce you to a popular app which is called “mercari” for a flea market. Basically, one of sharing economy service is. As easy to use it and also it is possible to keep anonymity by posting, nowadays this is the biggest website in Japan.
Hi Tura, when writing try to keep your idea clear and to the point as possible. Concise is key to ensure clarity. In Japan the most popular App is Mercari. Basically a market place. User friendly and the anonymity it offers when posting is a plus!
2022年1月24日
#157 Could you help me correct my post? 【mercari / メルカリ】 "Mercari" a popular flea market app. It is basically an app used for selling things. It is easy to use and it is also possible to post anonymously. This is currently the biggest website in Japan.
Keep up the good work! I mostly made your sentences more direct. Even native English speakers don't write directly that well so don't feel bad. :) 頑張って〜
2022年1月29日
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