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#1 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐시니 SHINNIE
职业教师Living a life of honesty and sincerity doesn't shield us from the skepticism and criticism of others. It's as if people always judge us hastily, regardless of whether our words are kind or harsh. This phenomenon appears to be pervasive. Today, I came across deeply saddening news, a reminder of how such unfortunate events seem to recur in our country. Rather than dwell in regret, let's embrace the things we truly desire and strive for a happier life.
2024年7月2日 13:54
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Living a life of honesty and sincerity doesn't, unfortunately, shield us from the skepticism of others. Often people judge hastily, regardless of the intent of our words. This phenomenon is pervasive. Like today, I came across deeply saddening news, a reminder of how unfortunate events seem to recur in our country. But, rather than dwell on feelings of regret, let's embrace the things we desire to happen and strive for a happier life.
Very good grammar. I made some mostly stylistics changes for flow, redundancy and consistency. However there is a gap in connection between the first three sentences and the last two. It's not clear to how the last two flow from the first two. How do the unfortunate events connect with living a life of honesty and sincerity?
2024年7月2日
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