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IT IS OCTOBER 2020. THIS IS THE LAST MONTH I PLAN TO UPDATE MY PROFILE.
I have been an italki member since 2016. I used to check this site daily to read and participate in the discussion forum and other community pages. Since italki removed the option to search for a language partner and moved the community to allow only mobile phone access, I do not plan to spend much time here in the future.
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2020年7月7日
Un reencuentro maravilloso ;)
No se sabe cómo hemos pasado de los divorcios a las flores por antonomasia de los diferentes países.
¡Es la magia de las conversaciones! Nunca sabes cómo van a acabar ;)
¡Excelente!!!
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- Fishing without a Rod (concluded)(continuing)In the very beginning, there <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">was</s> were no fish at all because the splashes had scared them away. But before long, around the bottle a little guy sneaked by. Then you found there were already a school of agile creatures that were trying to get the food from the bottle. Even at this moment, you still needed to keep silent and hold your breath. Soon, a brave guy darted into the bottle's neck and got a bite. Then it slipped away at once. Don't worry about the lucky guy who had fled. You learned that more fish started trying to <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">dark</s> dart in and get a bite.As many fish <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">struggling</s> struggled to nibble those lures, you just moved slowly forward and, when you were finally close enough, in a flash charged down to the bottle. <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">meanwhile</s> You covered the opening with your hand then picked it up. Since the mouth of the bottle was toward you, when the fish scampered off toward the deep side in a hurry, there was no way at all. Most of them became <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">your</s> a reward <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">of</s> for your patience.<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">As soon as </s>After you'd caught <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">some</s> several fish, you had better keep them in another big bottle or pail to keep them alive. Besides fish, if you were lucky, you might capture some small shrimps which were pretty active, jumping up and down. Sometimes we caught many special fish that looked wonderful with pink, red and yellow colors. None of us knew what their name was, so we just called them rainbow fish. All of us liked <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">keeping</s> taking them home to keep as pets. But kids were never good keepers, just <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">in</s> after one week none of them could survive.We didn't kill them intentionally <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">neither</s> nor fiddled with them; however, we didn't know how to feed them and how often to change the water. Losing those fish wouldn't make us sad very long because we knew that at another weekend we could get more and enjoy our time again.Fishing without any professional tools but a simple bottle is really fun. Recently, I often go fishing this way with my little daughter. When the delight ripples in her simple, lovely face, there is a sound echoing in my mind, as if I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">has come</s> have gone back in time and I <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">was</s> am young, playing, splashing, and fishing with those fellows, laughing and joking, as the wind whistles through the willows next to the river, taking our laughter far and far away.CommentAt the end, you started to write the verbs in present tense. I think you should keep the whole paragraph in present tense so the reader feels the past "becomes" the present when you "go back in time" in your memory. Nice ending for the story!0 人已投票2020年7月27日1
- If MT were the solution to all translation, interpretation, and localization issues, high-level employers like the UN and WHO would be using it already instead of employing translators.Translation students who believe their skills and training are unnecessary will end up working for clients who agree with them. The clients will pay poorly and treat the translators poorly, as if they are doing a great favor, and the translators' belief will be reinforced.Translation students who understand why and how their skills and training are necessary will look for jobs with employers who also understand this, like the UN, which hires trained, skilled translators.0 人已投票2020年7月26日0
- I would say the answer to your questions depends on (1) the quality of translators and (2) what kind of book. Since all translators in your thought experiment are equally (highly) qualified, I'll focus on (2).If the book is a textbook or technical manual, I would expect Book One and Book Hundred to be very similar. (Let's assume all necessary technical vocabulary exists in all target languages, so the translators don't need to struggle with introducing new technical concepts to their culture.) Book Hundred should be recognizable as Book One.If the book is poetry or literature, I would expect Book Hundred to be very different from Book One, not recognizable as Book One other than basic essence. (And honestly, many stories have the same "essence.") A few translation norms--trends in the translation choices made by translators no matter language or culture--cause this. These include (1) trying to clarify information, so target texts are usually a bit longer than source texts and (2) translating non-standard language (slang, swearing) as standard language. Translators also translate according to their own culture's social norms, so they will often omit material considered inappropriate or taboo in their own culture: sex, violence, whatever the culture doesn't allow. (If they don't do it, the publisher may insist on it.)I started an MA in Translation program at the beginning of this year. In the program, we read several papers by Itamar Even-Zohar and Zohar Shavit, two theorists who studied and noted the translation norms that I've mentioned.0 人已投票2020年7月26日0
- Strange dreams(Writing Challenge day 22)Psychologists interpret dreams as they are reflections <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to</s> of our real life. They are hidden thoughts, impressions and buried feelings.In my community, people care about what they see in their dreams. They rush to interpret <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">it</s> a dream when they wake up happy but try to forget it if it is a nightmare or bad one.It is well<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">- </s>known that when you see a snake or a scorpion in a dream, they mean you have enemies round you.When you <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">see</s> dream that you are eating something delicious, you will gain money, and when you <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">see yourself</s> dream you are crying, you will be happy and other interpretations, which are based on old opinions of dream interpreters.The dream that always <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">accompany</s> returns to me is that I walk bare-footed outside my home. When I tried to get the meaning of that <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">usual</s> recurring dream, I found different interpretations. The one that convinced me was that it means you face life’s difficulties.I don’t pay much attention to dreams as we see a lot of stuff on the internet and that creates various impressions in our <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">inners</s> subconscious mind. Those impressions are being interpreted as dreams.Have you ever <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">seen</s> had a dream that came true?CommentsI have kept a "dream journal" for many years and am always interested in the topic of dreams and dreaming.<ul><li>see X in a dream </li><li>dream about/that X</li><li>have a dream about X</li></ul>Usually if I want to talk about an action in a dream, I don't say "I saw myself eating fruit" or "I saw myself crossing a bridge." I'll say "I dreamed that I was trying to cross a bridge" or "I had a dream where I was trying to cross a bridge." When I want to talk about a thing in the dream, then I'll say "I saw a snake in my dream." (Also, I think the British use "dreamt" as past tense, but hey, I'm American, so I always write "dreamed.")A dream that you have many times over several weeks, months, or years is a "recurring dream" (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Recurring_dream.) I hope this helps! Very interesting topic.0 人已投票2020年7月25日1
- 我是左撇子,你是左撇子吗?我最近读了一篇文章《左撇子的独特科学》,觉得主题很有趣因为我是也左撇子。根据文章内容,左撇子人的大脑分析处理语言的方式与右撇子人的大脑不一样。具体来说,为了分析处理语言用右手人只使用大脑的半脑,而用左手人使用都全脑。看完这篇文章之后我就把它忘了,直到我和我的语伴朋友聊天。当聊到无关文章的话题如编织、缝制时,我的朋友告诉我,她学会了编织,但由于是左撇子,她永远无法编织得很好。实际上,我也有同样的经历,我很惊讶这个话题我们从未谈论过,虽然我们已经成为语伴朋友很长时间了。和她聊天之后,我也开始思考多少italki员又喜欢学习外语也又是左撇子。我没有兄弟姐妹,但我的父母、堂兄、表兄都用右手。除了我,只有我的祖父也是左撇子。你呢?这里还有谁是左撇子?如果你是左撇子,你觉得你喜欢学习外语的事实和你是左撇子有没有关系?左撇子对你生活的其他方面还产生了哪些影响?2020年7月25日10
- Fishing without a RodHave you ever gone fishing without a rod? To reply to this question, I bet you will think of a net. When this idea comes to me, I don't think of a net. Instead, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">there's</s> a little, narrow-necked bottle glitters in my mind.When I was young, I lived in a small village, where a small river flowed<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);"> by still</s>. It was my paradise, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">so</s> as it was to my fellow<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s</s> playmates.As a child, I didn't have pocket money to <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">buy</s> spend on a rod and a few fishhooks. But we, a crowd of <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">about</s> ten-year-old kids, never bothered to use <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">a</s> fishing rods to catch fish. No one could remember who was the first to invent<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">ed</s> this great way to fish, just as we didn't know who ever developed and taught us those interesting games we played every day.It didn't take any time to learn how to fish with a bottle. First, you just needed to get a discarded or unused plastic or glass bottle with a narrow neck. It was easy to find one in your kitchen. A sauce container or a sugar jar was good enough as long as it was transparent. Remove all labels and clean it up to make sure it smelt of nothing so that fish wouldn't notice it was a trap.How big it was depended on how big the fish you expected to catch were. To a kid, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">he paid no attention to what</s> the kind and size of the fish he could get didn't matter; the only thing he cared about was <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">to</s> playing together with those fellows<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);"> together</s>, laughing and splashing by the river.We also never <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">took care of</s> cared much about how to get and which kind of lures we would use. Digging in the ground for worms<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);"> underground</s>, seizing green larvae on leaves, searching for grasshoppers in grass or picking a piece of steamed bread from the kitchen <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">was</s> were all <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">an</s> available and joyful <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">way</s> options for <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">our</s> us kids.<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">To your surprise,</s> Though it may surprise you, a good fishing spot was not a place where fish gathered; the shade of trees or under a stone bridge was a better choice for us. Fish always found food even when it lured them into <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">they were in</s> a child's trap, a simple bottle.Wading into the water, not far from the bank, I would lay the bottle down on the riverbed <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">and</s> with the bottle mouth toward the bank, then put food inside, near the neck of the bottle. This way it was attractive enough for an inexperienced and greedy fish. At last <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">you</s> I only needed to sit down and be still, <s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">waiting</s> to wait for the fish to go in. Being patient was always necessary.CommentsBecause the writing is high level, I edited this as if it were written by a native speaker. Therefore, many of the changes are stylistic. (Your grammar and vocabulary were correct but I tried to improve style.) For example:buy --> spend on"Buy" is not wrong. But "buy" emphasizes the thing you buy; "spend on" emphasizes the amount of money or lack of money. This is a stylistic change only.Some of the changes are necessary. For example:our kids --> us kidsIn the essay, you write about you and your friends. "Our kids" refers to "the sons and daughters of me and my friends." I don't think that's what you want here. I think because 我们 can mean "we," "us," and "our" in Chinese depending on the context, it may cause confusion in English. In the phrase "...for us kids," the word "kids" is optional and emphasizes/clarifies "us." "Us" is an object pronoun and is the object of the preposition "for" (for whom? for them? for me?) In the phrase "for our kids," nothing is optional. "Our" is a possessive pronoun that shows possession of "kids" (whose kids? his kids? your kids?) You could just write "...for us" to be technically correct but I think "us kids" matches the tone and style.0 人已投票2020年7月22日1
- 你是左撇子吗? 我最近读了一篇文章《左撇子的独特科学》,觉得主题很有兴趣因为我是左撇子。根据文章,左撇子人的大脑分析处理语言的方式与右撇子人的大脑不一样。具体来说,为了分析处理语言用右手人只使用一大脑半球,而用左手人使用都脑半球。 看完这篇文章之后我忘了它,直到我和我的语言互相朋友聊天了。无关文章的话题如编织、缝制,我们谈论了。我的朋友告诉我,她学会了编织,但由于左撇子,她永远无法编织得很好。实际上,我也有同样的经历,我吃惊这个话题我们从未谈论过虽我们很长时间是语言互相朋友。 聊天和她以后,我也开始思考多少italki员喜欢学习外语的人们也可能是左撇子。我没有兄弟姐妹,但我的父母、堂兄、表兄都用右手。除了我,只有我的祖父也是左撇子。 你呢?谁在这里是左撇子?如果你是左撇子,你觉得你喜欢学习外语的事实和你的左撇子性质有没有关系?你的左撇子性质和别的经历的关系呢?2020年7月20日51
- @Miriam, muchas gracias por tu respuesta! Creo que tu situación es muy fuera de lo corriente. Pero, también creo que la calidad/la belleza de la letra no es una buena medida de “la verdadera mano dominante.” Soy zurda verdadera pero tengo letra mala también y siempre pienso que sea un problema relativo al sistema escritura (izquierdo al derecho). Creo que escribir de izquierdo al derecho sea más facil cuando una persona es diestra.Hace varios años, estudié el idioma árabe por un tiempo y por supuesto aprendía y usaba el sistema escritura de árabe (escrito de derecho al izquierdo). Un día en clase la profesora me dijo que mi letra de árabe está preciosa y estaba tan sorprendida. İYa tenía casi cuarenta años en ese momento y fue la primera vez en mi vida que una persona me dijo que mi letra está buena!Editado para agregar: Y gracias, Miriam, para compartir el enlace al tu texto. De hecho, “sordo” es vocabulario nuevo a mí. Gracias a Paco por la explicación de la razón del cambio de zurdo a diestro.0 人已投票2020年7月17日0

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