Bard Santiago
Hi there, it’s Bardo and I’m from México. Every day I’m trying to improve my English, that’s why I usually listen to audios and read texts. When I was in high school and college, I took some basic English courses. I also studied in a language school for two years. I’m currently taking English classes on digital platforms. Besides formal education at language schools, I’ve been using YouTube as my self study school. Since last September I started working in an American company. During my working day I attend several meetings speaking in English, I write emails and messages as well (In English of course). In my free time I talk to my friends and teachers around the world. This has helped me progress in my speaking and listening skills. Just now my English is not as good as I want, but I’m glad with the progress I made. I feel comfortable when I speak and express my thoughts and ideas. Now I’m no longer afraid to communicate in English.
Apr 1, 2023 6:27 PM
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Hi there, it's Bardo and I'm from Mexico. Every day, I try to improve my English, which is why I usually listen to audio and read texts. In high school and college, I took some basic English courses, and I also studied in a language school for two years. Currently, I am taking English classes on digital platforms. In addition to formal education at language schools, I have been using YouTube as my self-study school. Since last September, I have been working for an American company. During my workday, I attend several meetings where I speak in English and write emails and messages as well (in English, of course). In my free time, I talk to my friends and teachers around the world. This has helped me progress in my speaking and listening skills. Although my English is not as good as I want it to be, I'm happy with the progress I've made. I feel comfortable when I speak and express my thoughts and ideas, and I'm no longer afraid to communicate in English.
Your text is already very well-written, and it's great that you are committed to improving your English skills. One suggestion I would make is to try speaking with native English speakers as much as possible. This will help you to practice speaking and listening in a more natural way, and you'll also be exposed to a variety of accents and speaking styles. Keep up the good work!
April 8, 2023
"Hi there, it's Bardo and I'm from México. Every day, I try to improve my English by listening to audio and reading texts. When I was in high school and college, I took some basic English courses. I also studied in a language school for two years. Currently, I'm taking English classes on digital platforms. Apart from formal education at language schools, I use YouTube as a self-study tool. Since last September, I have been working in an American company, attending several meetings where I speak in English and writing emails and messages (in English, of course). In my free time, I talk to my friends and teachers from around the world, which has helped me progress in my speaking and listening skills. Although my English is not as good as I want it to be, I'm glad with the progress I have made. I feel comfortable when I speak and express my thoughts and ideas, and I'm no longer afraid to communicate in English."
The paragraph is well-organized and presents a clear sequence of the writer's experiences and progress in learning English. There were some minor errors in punctuation, such as missing commas after introductory phrases and clauses. These have been corrected in the corrected version. The paragraph effectively uses present and past tenses to describe the writer's experiences and progress, and it includes specific details such as attending meetings and talking to friends and teachers from around the world.
April 1, 2023
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