Could you please check this dialogue for mistakes?
Does it sound like a real informal conversation?
Any ideas what I could add to it?
A: Have you heard what happened to Steve?
B: About the car accident? Sure, I’m still shaken. That’s awful!
A: Did he fall asleep while driving? He’s a bit out there but he’s normally very cautious as he drives…
B: Really? I actually never liked Steve’s driving, it’s kinda sketchy.
A: I never noticed! Poor fella… Well, I guess it’s just how it goes sometimes.
B: Yeah… And you know what’s crazy? I was supposed to join him that day but I took a rain check
A: No way! Why didn’t you go?
B: I got swamped at work by the end of the day and couldn’t make it
A: I’ve got goosebumps all over my body, you could’ve died too!
B: I know, right?