斎春水
We all wither away as our prime years fade, A scene unbearable to see! Vaguely dreaming of far frontiers in the drizzle, The pipe fills the small hall with the chilly sound. I wish that all of the nature’s magnificence, the emotion of the land, the living energy of place could be photographed. The so-called division between the pure scientist and the applied scientist is more apparent than real. She was acquitted of all the charges against her. She acutely identified all the main problems. To all his problems she affected indifference. Do I really have nothing? We (including both the speaker and the person or persons spoken to) You've come in the nick of time. Let's put our heads together. Let's feed the kids first and have our dinner after. Come on, let's get this show on the road or we’ll be late. Let's just grab a quick bite. Let's not argue. Let's go swimming this afternoon.
Apr 2, 2023 9:08 AM
Corrections · 1
We all wither away as our prime years fade, a scene unbearable to see! Vaguely dreaming of far frontiers in the drizzle, the pipe fills the small hall with the chilly sound. [<- Technically correct, but it's nonsense because "the pipe" is also the subject of the verb "dreaming".] I wish that all of nature’s magnificence, the emotion of the land, the living energy of this/the/a place could be photographed. The so-called division between the pure scientist and the applied scientist is more apparent than real. She was acquitted of all the charges against her. She acutely identified all the main problems. To all his problems she affected indifference. [<-- Note that here "affected" suggests that she was faking her appearance of indifference.] Do I really have nothing? We (including both the speaker and the person or persons spoken to) You've come in the nick of time. Let's put our heads together. Let's feed the kids first and have our dinner after. Come on, let's get this show on the road or we’ll be late. Let's just grab a quick bite. Let's not argue. Let's go swimming this afternoon.
I was a little confused because the first 4-6 lines or so sound/read like the beginning of a poem. Then it starts to look like separate, unrelated sentences. A poem would be corrected differently. I have decided to assume that each sentence stands alone.
April 2, 2023
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