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Today is perfect. first I went to kikv, a large store that makes girls scream happyly. The store was called Girl Scream House. I bought a cute bracelet and a Handmade soap in the shape of duck. Secondly, I went to the Cat Cafe that have many difderent cat. these cats are not afraid of people at all. They like people who feed them snacks. The youngest cat is very timid. She sleeped on my lap. I bought some snacks for them, then I became the most popular with cats. They are all around with me. I am very happy.
Jan 10, 2021 12:57 PM
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Today is perfect. first I went to kikv, a large store that makes girls scream
happily. The store was called Girl Scream House. I bought a cute bracelet and a
Handmade soap in the shape of a duck. Secondly, I went to the Cat Cafe that has
many different cats. These cats are not afraid of people at all. They like people
who feed them snacks. The youngest cat is very timid. She slept on my lap. I
bought some snacks for them, then I became very popular with the cats. They were
all around with me. I am very happy.
January 10, 2021
Today is perfect a day for me. Firstly, I visited Kikv, a large retail store. This store is very appealing to girls. Many girls scream happily while shopping inside. The store is also known as Girl Scream House. I bought a cute bracelet and handmade soap in the shape of duck.
Secondly, I went to the Cat Cafe that have
many different cats. These cats are not afraid of people at all. They definitely like people who feed them snacks. The youngest cat is very timid. She slept on my lap. Nevertheless, I bought some snacks for all the cats. As a result, I became the most popular visitor among all the cats. They surrounded me and I was very happy.
Sorry I don’t know what you mean by Kikv, so I assume this is the name of the store.
January 12, 2021
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林深闻钟
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English
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